❝i'll set you up against the stars❞

Jun 11, 2010 11:47

together and at peace | axis powers hetalia | 900 words | greece ; mama greece | pg |
in which mama greece bestows knowledge upon her son in the only way she knows how.
for initials.

sometimes he wakes up and forgets that she is gone. )

✦fanfiction, ✶character: ancient greece, ✶character: greece, ✖request, ✤fandom: hetalia

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faerichylde June 11 2010, 19:27:16 UTC
this is absolutely beautiful. the entire idea of it -- a mother telling stories to her son -- is simple, but you managed to put a great deal more into it. really nicely done.

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moirae June 13 2010, 15:15:08 UTC
thank you so much! i'm glad you liked it! &hearts

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000_hester_000 June 11 2010, 19:41:44 UTC
This is beautiful. I love the link between Mama Greece's stories and her acknowledgment of her own fate.

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moirae June 13 2010, 15:15:47 UTC
That was actually the prompt I was given for this piece, so I'm glad it came across so clearly. Thanks for commenting!

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sweetwintersong June 12 2010, 02:00:41 UTC
ASDFJKL; HNGGGH I HATE YOU YOU WRITE SO WELL.

SO BEAUTIFUL.

The idea is so sweet and simple, but you managed to make it more beautiful than I've ever seen. Wonderful job!

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moirae June 13 2010, 15:18:25 UTC
Ah, thank you so much &hearts

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chromatic_coma June 12 2010, 02:55:34 UTC
...i've been deprived of your writing for far, far too long.

this is the most brilliant fic since brilliant. god, just, everything about the characterizations and the language makes me cry tears of awe. this is like death and sin wrapped in a veil of innocence; brilliant. <3

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moirae June 13 2010, 15:21:58 UTC
thank you, dear. i really haven't had the chance to write in ages, so i was scared that i was out of practice. i'm glad you liked it! &hearts

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chromatic_coma June 13 2010, 15:25:05 UTC
you don't have to worry, it was excellent.

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glory_of_hera June 12 2010, 03:13:10 UTC
ooooh goodness. what a beautiful ending line ♥

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moirae June 13 2010, 15:23:25 UTC
thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it &hearts

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