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moirae in heavenisonfire

❝do you come here much? i've got to see your face some more❞

Jun 29, 2010 11:33

den of thieves ; chapter four : love drunk | axis powers hetalia | 2300 words | vietnam ; taiwan ; france ; lithuania ; ukraine ; belarus ; austria ; hungary ; prussia | pg |
mafia au. in which love gets in the way of other objectives.

chapter one.
chapter two.
chapter three.

( Maybe I would have chosen differently, if I'd been given a choice. )

✶character: ukraine, ✦fanfiction, ✶character: taiwan, ✶character: france, ✶character: belarus, ✽chapterfic: den of thieves, ✶character: austria, ✶character: lithuania, ✶character: hungary, ✶character: prussia, ✶character: vietnam, ✤fandom: hetalia

Comments 9

leriacossato June 29 2010, 19:20:28 UTC

omgupdate yaay!

that france/vietnam part was amazing. ;w; i'm loving that pairing so much now...

though i'm having a little trouble trying to sort out who's in each family group xD especially with france being a lone ranger, if you will.

moirae June 29 2010, 20:43:00 UTC

ask and you shall receive ;]

china --> taiwan, japan, vietnam, korea, thailand (-hong kong)
russia --> latvia, lithuania, belarus, ukraine, estonia, poland
turkey --> greece, egypt, hungary, bulgaria
uk --> america, canada, seychelles, australia (+hong kong)
germany --> prussia, switzerland, austria, liechtenstein
spain --> belgium, romano, cuba, netherlands

and then italy and france are freelancers

leriacossato June 29 2010, 20:48:14 UTC

/it makes so much sense now.

thank you~

chromatic_coma June 29 2010, 20:32:51 UTC

prussia will never, ever win anything, will he? poor guy xD

things are heating up, but the fact that it's four chapters in and everything is still so shrouded in mystery is both a show of your amazing writing skills and incredibly frustrating at the same time. i'm sure that makes your proud <3

are you spelling "restraunt" incorrectly on purpose? i caught it twice

moirae June 29 2010, 20:45:08 UTC

oh, i don't know about that. it's not over yet. ;]

well, as i said before the first five chapters are one arc, then there's a ~explanation flashback~ then the last five chapters wrap things up. so answers soon maybe sometime ok.

not at all. i wonder why my spellcheck didn't catch that. thank you &hearts

chromatic_coma June 29 2010, 21:31:36 UTC

ahaha

yay, explanations!

spellcheck fails

digging_4_more June 30 2010, 03:17:23 UTC

Oh my god! I love your France!!! *insert fangirl squeal*
And Prussia! and Austria!

...and is Taiwan calling Spain or Netherlands?

this chappie just put me at the edge of me seat. Wonderful work!

moirae June 30 2010, 15:56:41 UTC

Ah, thank you &hearts

...that remains to be seen. It's the latter.

renegadespiral July 15 2010, 23:25:07 UTC

Ah, this is quite a gem I've stumbled upon! :3
I really like how you've managed to divide it all up and I can't wait to see the big picture X3
I hope to see an update soon maybe??? :3