Comments | heavenisonfire: ❝i had to give it away, i had to give you away❞

moirae in heavenisonfire

❝i had to give it away, i had to give you away❞

Dec 12, 2010 22:49

vulnerable hearts | axis powers hetalia | 1500 words | prussia ; spain ; france (genderbent) | pg13 |
in which girl friends prove to be less steadfast than their male counterparts.
written for chromatic_coma's birthday.

( A single line from her lips can put any man in his place, as her kings learn time and time again. Françoise is not the type of woman one should mess with. )

✦fanfiction, ✶character: france, ❥pairing: prussia/france, ❥pairing: france/spain, ✖birthday, ❥pairing: prussia/spain, ✶character: spain, ✶character: prussia, ✶character: genderbent, ✤fandom: hetalia

Comments 5

chromatic_coma December 13 2010, 17:42:58 UTC

;_; God, this is beautiful, Hallie. Wow, the language, and the emotions, all of it. I'm floored.

I especially love your characterization of Françoise, mostly because I want to punch her for being such a, pardon my French, bitch to Antonia. It's not very often that a character can get me so mad, and even harder when it's done so subtly and primly. I really love this, thank you so much for the amazing gift <3

moirae December 13 2010, 19:56:48 UTC

I guess what I really like about Nyotalia is exploring the impact of gender on relationships. I dislike the idea that the characters remain the same with just boobs slapped on, you know? The reason the BFT works so well is because they're, well, bros. Girls would have to have at least a bit more cattiness to their relationship. Obviously I embellished a bit, but I suppose I also wanted to comment on what promiscuity means to a man versus a woman. Francis is a loveable perv, Francoise is a slut. It's not a fair distinction, but it's definitely one that exists.

I'm glad you liked it.

chromatic_coma December 14 2010, 01:00:45 UTC

I know. I really do love the fact that you made all those nods to the double standard and the role that gender would play on the trio. Françoise is completely a slut, and you make it work very well.

♥

windweaver1092 December 13 2010, 18:04:56 UTC

Hey Hallie! Rose linked me to this, and let me just say that it's really really amazing! It took me a few minutes to figure out who Gisela was. XD I just want to say thank you a whole bunch for writing such a great fic for my baby's birthday. I know it means an awful lot to her, and it means a lot to me that you went out of your way to make her happy~ <3

p.s. FUCK YEAH ENGLAND TAKE YOUR WOMAN. UNFUNF.

...*cough* >> Ahem.

midori_lover December 14 2010, 10:31:16 UTC

I rarely read fanfics with genderbent characters but I'm glad I read this. This was really amazing. I loved how you wrote the emotions and everybody's characterization. Loved this! ♥