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Title: Forever A Playboy
Author: heavenlove
Pairings: OnKey
Ratings: PG-14?
Genre: Angst
Summary: Would Jinki change his way?
A/N: Saengil chukha hamnida, saengil chukha hamnida, saranghae unnie, saengil chukha hamnida!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY UNNIE!!! special thanks to my beta reader, ( Read more... )
Author: heavenlove
Pairings: OnKey
Ratings: PG-14?
Genre: Angst
Summary: Would Jinki change his way?
A/N: Saengil chukha hamnida, saengil chukha hamnida, saranghae unnie, saengil chukha hamnida!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY UNNIE!!! special thanks to my beta reader, ( Read more... )
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i really like this phrase^^..
this is so sad~~T-T
jinki was so bad in here..
i hope u write a sequal for this..
hwvr ur writing rock!!fighting!!
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ahh, that phrase is one of my favourites. =DD
heheh, i wont write a sequel.
i am sorry.
but, i will be writing a chaptered fic.
so please look forward to it!
its sorta a continuation to this
but you can read it alone too.
its fine in both ways. =DD
hehehe, nahh, my writing isnt that good.
but thanks for your comments!
hwaiting! =D
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ya!!!!!!!!!!!:)
I look forward to it:3
Can you post it on the Onkey community so i can read it? i check this community for new Onkey fanfics every 2-3 days:)
Go Onkey!
Love your trust quote. I love how you wrote your Key. Can't wait to see what happen next^.^
<3 Yuki
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maybe i will change my mind on the continuation!
HAAHA, i will be writing a chaptered fic.
and it will all be about trust.
uhm, probably, a trust quote every update?
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Damn that jessica. DAMN HERRRR *KILLS HER*
I cant seriously believe Jinki could do this. *sobs harder*
anyway.
“Ugh, who is it?” Jinki then saw who was at the door and looked at his right, “Omo, Kibum, its not what you think…”
“Jinki, I saw it clearly with my own eyes. Thanks for making me wait outside the amusement park for 3 hours. I even got wet because of you, and your gift, is totally the best gift for my birthday. You made me realize that a player would forever be a player. This is why I was so hesitant to give you my heart from the beginning of this relationship. I shouldn’t have trusted you. Thanks a lot, Jinki.”
THIS MADE ME SAD/MAD/MIXED EMOTIONS. BUT I WAS SAD. I know I WASSSSS =D
I experienced this things.. but not a player like thaat..
Idk Dongsaeng. Im feeling so giggly right now.
and YES, THANK YOOOOOOOUUUUU SO MUCH! :D
Seriously. you made my day/night? whatever. so happy ^^
I love youuuuu :3
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approximately 30 more minutes to your 15th birthday! =DD
i am glad that you liked itt. =DDD
heheheheh, love you too! =DD
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'Trust is like a paper, once its crumpled, it can never be perfect again'
Gahh. I love you Dongsaeng :3
like SERIOUSLY. >:D
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i have more lines for trust. =DD
hahaha! i love you too unnie!!
=DDD
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“Trust is like a paper, once its crumpled, it can never be perfect again"
this part hit me the most.
i hate that jinki's a plyer here! and jessica! argh!! -pushes her away-
you write so goooooooooooooooood!~
I love this even though it broke my heart.
I hope Kibum would come back soon, like tmr or something. i dont care ):
but thank you for sharing bb!
<3<3<3
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hehehe, that quote! =DDDDD
yeapp! push her away! =DDD
lalalala~
no i dontttttt!
mine is not goodddddd!
hahaha, i shall leave it to your imagination! =DDD
np^^
thanks for the comment! =D
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poor kibum
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kibum so poor thing.
but i think i am damn biased.
always making onew the bad guy?
HAHAHA, dont be saddddd.
smileee! =D
thanks for commenting!
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Aww I just want to hold Kibum :[ !
And I love how Kibum compared trust with paper :]
Thanks for sharing ^^
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i wanna hold kibum too. D=
Trust is like a piece of a paper, once its crumpled, it can never be perfect again.
np^^ i am glad that you read it and comment!
thanks for commenting! =D
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