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Jul 21, 2010 20:57

Title: Too Late
Author: heavenlove
Genre: Angst
Ratings: pg-13
A/n: I am back with an angsty one shot! enjoy it! =D

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fanfic: onew/key, yaoi

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almighty_tofuuu July 21 2010, 13:15:34 UTC
awww, angst isn't it? key died, onew is really a jerk eh? but i really dont understand why he said sorry and showed up with a girl? but anws, it's niceee, nicer than mine :)

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heavenlove July 21 2010, 13:18:27 UTC
HAHAHA, its sad, isnt it?
i wanted to cry when i wrote this.
onew so UGHHH.

he is not sincere in apologising.
he wanted to tease key.
therefore, he said sorry and came with a girl.

HAHA, thankss!
thanks for the comment and reading!
LOVE YOU LOADSSSS. =D

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almighty_tofuuu July 21 2010, 13:20:07 UTC
ohh, hahahahaha, love you too! natasha havent read this yett ah? hahhhhahaahah, so fake lor, BAD ONEW ):

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natashaanwar July 21 2010, 13:25:02 UTC
omg i wrote something so long using my itouch already and my ipod just died on my! i have to write all over again! okay. how come the story so short? i would have enjoyed it more if it was longer. add more scenes and actions, how did key get banged?? And i think there's missing info. KEY DIED?! that's so sadistic manzxz. haha but anyway good job! i like it. :) i was actually expecting the second part to your previous fanfic story. Oh well i like this story, i just hope that you'll like write longer or something for the next story. Goodjob!! xx i like it, no kidding. I'm just commenting

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almighty_tofuuu July 21 2010, 13:30:11 UTC
yeahh, she should write longer lor! :D

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heavenlove July 21 2010, 13:34:35 UTC
HAHA, too tired to continueee. AHAHHA
second chapter arh? HAHAHA!
i see first kk!
i dont know whether i should write about their past anot. HAHA, i am still thinking. =D HAHAH

thanks for commenting and reading!
LOVE YOU LOADSSS! =D

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almighty_tofuuu July 21 2010, 13:29:41 UTC
yeahh, i was thinking that that was chapter 2 when i saw in your book lehh.

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heavenlove July 21 2010, 13:34:58 UTC
HAHAHA, do you want chapter 2 that muchhhh? =D

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almighty_tofuuu July 21 2010, 13:35:56 UTC
yeahh,you know, actually i do, so it means that you should better hurry write :D

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heavenlove July 21 2010, 13:40:32 UTC
YES MAAM! =D

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ttwyaopbtoyatw July 21 2010, 13:47:49 UTC
i can't feel bad for onew. i'm sory he's a sick bastard. you apologize and then show up for a date with another girl! what the hell! i don't even get it! when key's trying to defend himself, all he can say is work it out between yourselves? so, if key didn't die, he would continue his crap right? i'm not saying i'm happy about key dying but i'm happpy it taught onew a lesson.

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heavenlove July 21 2010, 13:51:20 UTC
i feel kinda sad for key.
aishhh.
damnn sad.
key shouldnt have died right!

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