awww, angst isn't it? key died, onew is really a jerk eh? but i really dont understand why he said sorry and showed up with a girl? but anws, it's niceee, nicer than mine :)
omg i wrote something so long using my itouch already and my ipod just died on my! i have to write all over again! okay. how come the story so short? i would have enjoyed it more if it was longer. add more scenes and actions, how did key get banged?? And i think there's missing info. KEY DIED?! that's so sadistic manzxz. haha but anyway good job! i like it. :) i was actually expecting the second part to your previous fanfic story. Oh well i like this story, i just hope that you'll like write longer or something for the next story. Goodjob!! xx i like it, no kidding. I'm just commenting
HAHA, too tired to continueee. AHAHHA second chapter arh? HAHAHA! i see first kk! i dont know whether i should write about their past anot. HAHA, i am still thinking. =D HAHAH
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i can't feel bad for onew. i'm sory he's a sick bastard. you apologize and then show up for a date with another girl! what the hell! i don't even get it! when key's trying to defend himself, all he can say is work it out between yourselves? so, if key didn't die, he would continue his crap right? i'm not saying i'm happy about key dying but i'm happpy it taught onew a lesson.
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i wanted to cry when i wrote this.
onew so UGHHH.
he is not sincere in apologising.
he wanted to tease key.
therefore, he said sorry and came with a girl.
HAHA, thankss!
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second chapter arh? HAHAHA!
i see first kk!
i dont know whether i should write about their past anot. HAHA, i am still thinking. =D HAHAH
thanks for commenting and reading!
LOVE YOU LOADSSS! =D
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aishhh.
damnn sad.
key shouldnt have died right!
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