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Fanfic: I can see through

Apr 26, 2011 05:50

Title: I can see through
Author: Heavenreturned
Pairing: Balthazar and Dean (This is a Gen Story)
Rating: PG
Notes: This is for the 03: Past square on my spn_30snapshots table. This story’s theme song is ‘Fast Forward the Future’ by Simon Collins. Dean is about 5 in this story

Prompt Table is Here

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( I can have Fake cut? )

fic, dean, fluff, supernatural, balthazar, 30snapshots

Comments 12

geaven April 26 2011, 10:40:09 UTC

Go into Dean Winchester's past and find something embarrassing to use against him... *snort* I could see Balthazar doing that. ;)

Nice plot idea, with Balthie (Thaz?) growing more understanding towards Dean by visiting him as a kid. Interesting to see how Dean immediately bought that it was the demons and not the angels who took his mum away. But I guess it had something to do with how Mary always described the angels as good creatures.

Anyway, enjoyed it. :)

heavenreturned April 26 2011, 10:42:33 UTC

Thank you for reviewing! Yes part of it is Mary. I think for me also it's the fact that we never know exactly what Dean saw in that nursery. Plus you have to admit John was kind of a jack ass (Yes he was grieving but still a jack ass) I fully can believe Dean knew from either seeing it or from John that it was a Demon from the get go.

I am very glad you enjoyed it :D

kat_of_rafters April 26 2011, 11:58:34 UTC

Nice. Your characterizations were great, little Dean was adorable, and I love the end. It was a nice touch.

heavenreturned April 26 2011, 12:07:49 UTC

Thank you!! I was a bit worried about OOC but come on who wouldn't have their heart strings tugged by kid Dean all sad? LOL

taraxacumoff April 26 2011, 14:08:59 UTC

Little Dean is just adorable and so sad ><

I love your Balthazar a lot: great, mischevious...and the angel underneath with sympathie for the poor kid.

heavenreturned April 26 2011, 15:33:27 UTC

Thank you ^^

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heavenreturned April 26 2011, 15:33:58 UTC

My second fic for this table is heading the more gentle route too Totally unplanned but loved

moonbeamdancer April 26 2011, 21:28:15 UTC

This was ADORABLE, and we demand MORE!

I can say that of ALL my friends who write for SPN actually. I think you may make me a member of Camp Thaz, Gabriel is not happy with you or about this. Cas is too busy laughing over it to be bothered by it.

heavenreturned April 26 2011, 22:57:35 UTC

Awwww I'm so glad you like it. And Camp Thaz is fun buaahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. I'm working on another story now :D It's kind of bittersweet tho