buzz killz

[heavens_addict]

ok so i've been working on a bit of a piece.. but am stuck.. surprise surprise.. and i know there are some loverly writers out there so i thought i'd toss this out and look for some opinions and ideas.. on how it is.. how it might go.. any thoughts really.. for once i'd like to finish a peice in under a year. lol. so here it is. :) it's choppy cuz

Comments

[wickedanima]

Ooh pretty! Your writing takes me back. ^_^

[heavens_addict]

thanks.. wasn't quite what i meant tho in regards to crit's... i would love to know where you think it should go.. or how.. like i said.. am lost. :S

[wickedanima]

I wasn't critting, I was plainly commenting to make noise to make me happy about making noise in your direction.

But now that you ask ...

It seem a bit Suspense/Horror to me. It would be fun to take the 'reality' of the dreamer and blur it around a bit. Start with reality, then bend and twist it into a long twisty spiral of reality confusing stuff.

Make sense?