liar, liar. [1/1]

Jan 29, 2011 23:43

taemin/minho; nc-17; ~1900; liar, liar, pants on fire. Or, without pants, on fire.
a/n: dedicated to chaeii  and whoever's bummed about school! stay happy. ♥ (including myself) So, I've never tried graphic smut before. ;__; I'll work harder in future! >)

warnings: language, pwp

liar, liar )

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leetaeminlover January 30 2011, 03:42:57 UTC
OMG THIS WAS SO EFFING HOTTT
and i LOL-ed at the last part; orange juice ftw!!! haha XD

i've always loved your stories, im SO sorry for this only being my first comment >< cuz i dont really comment much, unless its smth i get REALLY crazy about! <3

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heehe January 30 2011, 03:48:39 UTC
aaaah, glad that it was! \o/ taemin is an evil maknae. >)
goodness, you don't have to be sorry for anything! it's so flattering that you read my stories. :') i'vealwaysthoughtmystorieswouldbeignores;_;
i'm honoured then, that you've decided to comment. ^^ thank you for reading! ♥

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leetaeminlover January 30 2011, 03:50:39 UTC
NONONONONOOOOOO THEY ARE FAR FROM BEING IGNORED
they are absolutely AWESOME :)
i think its your way of writing and the lengthy-ness of the stories that appeal to me, but anw you're an AMAZING writer! i cant wait till your next fic~

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justangel January 30 2011, 03:55:22 UTC
ASEETYFERJKUUKDEFWGCBJUIFUJDEKCDEKVCERUJT♥͡.̮♥͡UD!!!!!!
This is unforgivable!!! You're making me a perverted ahjumma the first time I wake up in the morning >:(
Why would you tease me with such...such...image of Taebb with all his gloriously laid scheme while still maintaining his innocence? I can so, so imagine the look in Taemin's eyes, his fierce stare in lucifer. And who on earth, including Minho (and this helpless noona), could ever resist such Taebb?

And to think that this is your first smut... Thank god you write slightly differently than the usual in-depth style, or you would have too profound effect on my still half-sleep-induced morning.

♥ u bb!

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heehe January 30 2011, 04:34:11 UTC
HAYYY BB~ ♥ I'm so sorry. ;__; butit'shardnottobeapervertwithminhobeingsounfyandtaeminbeingsohot. i can't help it. ;__;
sjdghkjrehgkjhgjrgjk, i'm not skillful enough to write in-depth smut. HAHA. thank you for reading! ♥

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justangel January 30 2011, 09:10:36 UTC
Oh bb, you're skillful with words as it is!
You're awesome for being able to create different mood for different kind of fictions.
I do wish, though, that one day I would find you reading a make love scene between Taemin and Minho where it's not smut, with your thought exploring style and emotion provoking ability. It would be profound, I think, if you make a scene where lovemaking isn't a sexual act, but an expression of love between the two. If I beg enough will you consider to write one?

Btw I'm dealing with the fic I said I'll write as well...and I'm stuck. So I envy you again :/

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heehe January 30 2011, 14:44:01 UTC
aww, i just try to practice as much as i can. be my own worst critic. :)
you don't have to beg for anything! goodness. ;_; i'm not sure how a lovemaking scene would entail, their thoughts, their actions, how to make it good. i would need a reference to see if i am able to write something of such quality, but if you would like, i can recommend a fic that may be similar to what you're looking for. i think you can google it, 'worse fates than this' by noraehaeyo. please give it a read, i think you'll find it more than satisfactory - it is amazing. :)

oh please don't envy me, i do get stuck a lot too! just try and write, and if it doesn't work, then delete it and try again. hwaiting! ♥

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mellovesshinee January 30 2011, 03:59:19 UTC
LOL. i like this sentence: Honestly though, it had just been orange juice in Taemin’s cup a few hours ago.
BAD TAEMIN! BAD TAEMINNNN!!!!! BUT THIS WAS SO HOT.

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heehe January 30 2011, 04:35:12 UTC
:DDDD yes taemin, bad taemin! >)
\o/ glad that it was! Thank you for reading and commenting. ^^ ♥

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simneesee January 30 2011, 04:00:58 UTC
ohmg so UNF ( ... )

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heehe January 30 2011, 04:37:00 UTC
sdlkghkjrg, :') *happy that you liked it* i'm nervous about dirty talk during sex notthati'vewrittenmuchhere so i was afraid of the dialogue being off-putting. 2min alley!sex though, i had to write it or i'll keep getting bothered ~___~ nggggh.

/revives you
aw, thank you! i'll try and write better in future. ^^ thank you for reading and commenting. ♥

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heehe January 30 2011, 04:47:30 UTC
YOU'RE STILL COLD AFTER READING THIS? :( /shoots self
\o/ glad that you liked it bb! ♥ thanks for reading and commenting. ^^

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