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heehe

moving out [1/1]

Jun 08, 2011 01:57

jonghyun/kibum; pg-13; warnings: character death
it can't be left behind
wc: ~1,400
a/n: first proper jongkey fic. ^^"

( moving out [1/1] )

Comments 25

heehe June 8 2011, 02:24:27 UTC

spot ficmom chaeii, this is for you ♥

chaeii June 8 2011, 03:03:40 UTC

o god my heart stopped for a moment when I saw you had one comment okay

Firstly, wehrouighneoirkhtehmtjhpn I've been waiting for new fic from you foreverrrr and then you tell me you will be done with one by weekend and it is only Wednesday best present ever.

O god, I love this fic to death I swear. I don't think I ever told you, but I love non-linear fics, and you know how much I gravitate towards angst and death!fics so this is like perfection + you are the one that wrote it and just !!!

I love how this non-linear-ness is brought along by Kibum's memories as he walks around his - their - apartment for the last time, especially how his memories aren't all happy, because the bad memories are also memories, yet the contrast of the fact that he is now alone and used to not be alone is still portrayed. Your descriptions of the present, with the bathroom smell, the couch meant for two, the place being spacious is especially heartbreaking to me for some reason. Like, idk, these small things are what really matter in the end when someone ( ... )

heehe June 9 2011, 13:09:01 UTC

HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO REPLY TO THIS. ;____; WHAT ARE YOU. ♥
loveyourdpbtw&youknowi'dgiveyouallmyfirstcomments

ugh waylt. what best present. /wibbles/ ;~;
WHY, WHY ARE YOU. JUST UGH. SFKDJGKEHTKGJ. I LOVE YOU MORE. ♥

:\ it's the littlest things that hurt us the most. and i'm glad that showed leaving cause i really was trying to hint through that hehehe. (and partly cause i just got new body shop soaps and i'm totally happy and excited about them \o/)

:'(

I'M SORRY I JUST. I JUST TYHOUGHT ABPOUT IT AND I NEEDED TO PUT IT IN MY HEART TOO OKAY IDGI IT JUST FEELS LIKE SUCH A PRIVATE JONGKEY THING TO SAY UGH. FML. ;_;

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK. WAYLT I AM NOT AMAZING I WILL WRITE OFC I WILL NEVER STOP MY WRITING IS NOT LIKE MAGIC YOU ARE MAGIC YOUR WRITING IS MAGIC HOW DO YOU DO IT YOU NEED TO IMPART SOME SKILLZ TGO ME. AND I LOVE YOU MORE AND I'M GLAD THAT YOU LOVED THIS AND OMG FML GOD. ♥

lunathunderhead June 8 2011, 02:58:38 UTC

This was just dozens of different shades of beauty and sadness. It's perfect.

heehe June 9 2011, 13:05:33 UTC

sakdjhf, thank you so much for reading. ;~; ♥

jinkibumiminho June 8 2011, 04:18:45 UTC

Beautifully written. I enjoyed the slice of life excerpts, and the humor:
“Hey, do y’know earthworms have five hearts?” Jonghyun asks suddenly.

“No, why would I?” He’s so weird sometimes, but Kibum finds it endearing.

“There, we spent five seconds more together. Let’s have another five -”

Lovely.

heehe June 9 2011, 13:05:06 UTC

goodness, thank you. ^^" /bows/
i'm glad that you liked it hehehe, thank you so much for reading. ^^ ♥

greedy_wolf June 8 2011, 08:43:27 UTC

oh, this is just so beautiful! <3

Thank you!

heehe June 9 2011, 13:04:14 UTC

eeeek! glad you liked it. ^^" ♥

chocolatos June 8 2011, 10:50:13 UTC

oh... jjong =="
no words coming out of my head since my mind flips upside down along with Kibum's heart

heehe June 9 2011, 13:04:00 UTC

awww, sorry. ;~; /clings/
thank you for reading. :)