That so did not suck! I'm very glad to see more of it, adn this bit...
“Perhaps you want to break me so nobody else will try,” Justin nods.
Woah, loved it! And the bit where Justin implied he'd been sucking JC's dick back when JC was 19... oh holy hell would I like to hear about that. Many good good images brought to mind.
Lyd, girl. Your words are so visual the story just slides over my skin like an electric kiss as I experience them. I always forget that and it's such a pleasure to re-experience it. Thanks.
how the hell did I miss this? *looks at the date you posted* Ah, that's how I missed.
Goodness woman, you just keep topping yourself with every chapter. :) This didn't suck in the least. I still love all the little implications and all the inner doubts and worries that have a tendency to pop up now and then.
And you have no idea how much I would love to watch JC dance like a turkish belly dancer ... or to see photos of him handcuffed to the shower.
JC’s sleeping, but he’s responsive to a caress of the spine or a tussle of the hair.
I like this line.
“Don’t like it when I ravish you first. Don’t like it when I make you mine. Don’t like it when I make you come first.” Justin asks. “I suspect you don’t like it when I turn the tables, JC.”
JC looks down, lashes brilliant and dark on his pale skin.
And that's the crux right there. He's fine with playing so long as it's his game.
One for sorrow, two for joy, three for girls, four for boys. Five for silver and six for gold and seven for secrets never to be told.
He should call it "order of importance." :D
“Perhaps you want to break me so nobody else will try,” Justin nods.
And that, to me, is the entire essence of this section and their progressively fucked-up relationship--because as JC begins to admit his feelings and weave them into the RP they've created, this universe he's built from the ground up, the only thing he begins to fear is losing Justin, when it was Justin he was trying to scare in the first place.
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“Perhaps you want to break me so nobody else will try,” Justin nods.
Woah, loved it! And the bit where Justin implied he'd been sucking JC's dick back when JC was 19... oh holy hell would I like to hear about that. Many good good images brought to mind.
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girl. Your words are so visual the story just slides over my skin like an electric kiss as I experience them. I always forget that and it's such a pleasure to re-experience it. Thanks.
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Goodness woman, you just keep topping yourself with every chapter. :) This didn't suck in the least. I still love all the little implications and all the inner doubts and worries that have a tendency to pop up now and then.
And you have no idea how much I would love to watch JC dance like a turkish belly dancer ... or to see photos of him handcuffed to the shower.
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I like this line.
“Don’t like it when I ravish you first. Don’t like it when I make you mine. Don’t like it when I make you come first.” Justin asks. “I suspect you don’t like it when I turn the tables, JC.”
JC looks down, lashes brilliant and dark on his pale skin.
And that's the crux right there. He's fine with playing so long as it's his game.
One for sorrow, two for joy, three for girls, four for boys. Five for silver and six for gold and seven for secrets never to be told.
He should call it "order of importance." :D
“Perhaps you want to break me so nobody else will try,” Justin nods.
And that, to me, is the entire essence of this section and their progressively fucked-up relationship--because as JC begins to admit his feelings and weave them into the RP they've created, this universe he's built from the ground up, the only thing he begins to fear is losing Justin, when it was Justin he was trying to scare in the first place.
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