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hegemony

Fic: Tamed (part 2)

Sep 03, 2007 21:40

Title: Tamed
Fandom: CWRPS
Pairing: Jensen/Chad/Jared.
Summary: It's been long a long time since Chad's talked to Jared, and it's not like he likes Jensen that much. But all it takes is a little fetish to change everything completely.

( Part 2 )

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Comments 32

sparklinblossom September 5 2007, 19:02:32 UTC

*coughs*
Okay. I really need to go turn off that smoke alarm, as the sheets are smokin'!

Wow, just wow. Damn!

hegemony September 6 2007, 23:57:56 UTC

Thank you so much for reading, then! I'm so happy you liked it. You go turn off whatever you need, and If the sheets are still on fire, I'll call 911 for you, howabout that? ;)

elmathelas September 5 2007, 19:38:08 UTC

I read the conceptual BDSM in the disclaimer and wondered if they'd be fucking as part of an installation in a museum or something.

This Jensen has a much sharper edge than other characterizations of him that I've seen, but as his character points out to Chad, we don't really know him at all. Ambitious and well written, even if I wound up reading it as a fantasy that didn't have all that much to do with the actors named.

hegemony September 6 2007, 23:59:47 UTC

even if I wound up reading it as a fantasy that didn't have all that much to do with the actors named.

It's funny that you mentioned this, because I keep on getting different vibes from it every time I read the story itself. Sometimes, I can understand the headspace I was writing it in and it totally seems like I held up the 'characters' but at times it does seem exceptionally OOC, doesn't it?

Well, thank you for commenting, anyway, and I'm really happy you kept reading until the end.

stellamira September 6 2007, 10:16:12 UTC

Mmm, so deliciously dirty. Jared needs to be put in a collar more often, I'm just saying. But I think I like most what's happening after Jensen takes it off.

hegemony September 7 2007, 00:01:21 UTC

Hee, that's awesome, and I'm glad you liked it so much.

mss_celestal September 9 2007, 11:54:35 UTC

Umm...yeah, I don't even like Mayhem, but that has got to be the hottest thing I ever did read!! OMFG!

Great job! And sorry this comment sucks ass, but that just blew my fucking mind...LMAO!

wendy September 9 2007, 16:20:34 UTC

I want to confess that I actually read this the day after you posted it, but I had to take a little space to calm down before I could comment.

I love the dynamic you wrote between the three of them, how it's all a little fluid. I love the punishment vs. reward exposition. And holy crap, hot sexy kinks. MMM. You write that stuff better than anyone!

Also, all boys should have nipple rings...Jared should get Chad's done next. *pants*