Comments | heijihatsutori: [TVXQ/JYJ] Song to Say Goodbye

heijihatsutori

[TVXQ/JYJ] Song to Say Goodbye

Oct 31, 2011 06:33

There is a castle deep hidden in the forest.
They said it is only visible once on a shadow night of autumn.
If you saw the castle and were invited in, refuse it and never speak of it.
But, if the Puppet Prince himself called on you, never ever reject the offer.

Or you will be rejected of your own soul.

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Pretending not to know about tomorrow, ( Read more... )

oneshot, tvxq/jyj

Comments 18

joy_twinz November 7 2011, 09:21:48 UTC

Yay! Yoochun’s the prince and Junsu’s the violinist, right? Reading this is like reading a fairy tale book. I had so much reading this, it’s so refreshing!

heijihatsutori November 8 2011, 12:13:54 UTC

Err...maybe? Hahaha! Kidding, yeah you got it right. It's kinda obvious too actually, I think? :P Thanks for reading and commenting! Glad that you like it~ XD

missyoosu November 9 2011, 04:03:24 UTC

I finally got around to reading this!
It's beautifully written.

heijihatsutori November 9 2011, 15:54:07 UTC

Thanks for taking the time to read this! And for commenting too~ <3

sidmaron November 19 2011, 01:03:52 UTC

Oh, that was scary. X_X

heijihatsutori November 21 2011, 01:34:33 UTC

Uh..sorry, but what is? O_o??

sidmaron November 21 2011, 16:43:50 UTC

Huh, I don't get what you mean... xD

heijihatsutori November 22 2011, 02:03:53 UTC

Uh-huh~ :P

isimplicityy November 19 2011, 05:41:51 UTC

I had to read this two times to understand it fully haha.
But I truly loved the idea behind this. The sadness and the pain that Yoochun had to go through... He may have been wrong for believing the witch but that goes to show, being a commoner isn't a great thing either, having to experience death before your eyes... The ending was beautiful though. The portrait and the castle finally returning is amazing. I love how the people don't find the need to question why the prince looked like the traveler.
I think you did a great job on this. The way you wrote of the past, the present, and the characters is amazing. Thank you for writing this! Good luck in the contest^^

heijihatsutori November 21 2011, 01:46:10 UTC

OMG thanks a lot for taking your time to do so!
And your words...sashafsdfvd OMG it touched me greatly. ;_; Nothing rivals the feeling when people like my work, and especially like the idea behind it. And this is my first YooSu fic too so yeah, glad it comes off as ok. I don't know how to thank you for I'm a fail like that so have some cake? /gives you cake and ice-cream

Thank you so much for the support! \O/ *bows*