[Infinite] And The Looking Glass Falls -Part 3-

Aug 19, 2013 01:30

Title: And The Looking Glass Falls (3/3)

Author: Heiji Hatsutori
Length: 7,007 words
Genre: AU, Angst
Pairing: Bandfic
Rating: PG

Summary:There is an old grave digger living on a shack beside the cemetery on the hill. No one knows his name, or how old he is, but he has been there from the start, they say; back when the town was nothing but ( Read more... )

infinite, oneshot, bandfic

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t0g3p1 August 18 2013, 23:15:07 UTC
I read this in the infinite mini-bang and really loved it! Hope to see more from you :)

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heijihatsutori August 20 2013, 05:42:45 UTC
Thanks! I have a soft spot for this piece so it's a joy to know that people love it too. I'll work harder for my next installment. Thanks for the support! :D

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arymee January 31 2014, 16:49:27 UTC
I don't know what to say... Seriously. This fic just blows me away. I know that I'm late but just want to drop a comment to say how much I love it. I enjoy it from the start to the very end. I love how you mixed present and past into one, how you developed each characters and their emotions. I cried a little when the castle burned down.. It's seriously a good read. Thank you for this wonderful fic. This one will be one of my forever favorite fics for sure.

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heijihatsutori February 5 2014, 04:02:00 UTC
All your comments, wow, I should be the one to thank YOU for taking the time to read and commenting. I still consider myself as green in this writing thing, so to read this lovely comment is a pleasure! I never even thought that people will still be reading this, so thanks a lot. Better late than never, they say, so no worries. :)

Sorry for making you cry! On the castle part, well, I personally had a hard time writing it, if only for the imagery is too vivid in my mind, and my dongsaeng keeps berating me for making it too depressing OTL

Again, thank you for the kind words, and for giving this piece love! I'll work harder for the next installment! (and stop procrastinating OTL)

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baaadbsk March 30 2014, 06:52:41 UTC
I'm not sure if you're still active around here (I totally understand if you aren't!), but I just wanted to leave a comment to say what a wonderful story this was:) I found this story in the infinite big bang comm, seriously, I haven't read a story that drew me in so much in a long while. I really, really enjoyed reading this soo much!
I really liked your narration style, switching back and forth in time, even though it was a little confusing at first. And the fact that you kept the identity of the grave digger till the end...wow that really kept me on my toes guessing who it was. And all the vague references to the different travellers and people along the way, it was a surprise when I read on and found out who they were and what happened to them afterwards!
Just curious though, what happened to Sungjong after the bombing? (or was I too unperceptive to figure that out from your story?)
Anyway I also really liked the context your story is set in as well, I'm totally a sucker for medieval settings:)
Thanks so much for the story! :)))

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heijihatsutori April 4 2014, 12:17:31 UTC
First of all, thanks for the comment! And sorry for the late reply; as you've guessed, I'm no longer active here (though I do pop up here and there at times lol ( ... )

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baaadbsk June 22 2014, 07:13:15 UTC
wheee no worries:) as you probably can tell from this very, very late reply, I'm not too active either heh so I totally understand!
thanks for explaining it, it really cleared up the confusion for me!
i just cannot describe how much i like this still, really. i just re-read this, and when you revealed the characters one by one, especially the last section with the grave digger, gosh, it really hit me hard. that moment of realisation and nostalgia that you feel along with the characters...

No other words that can describe how much I enjoyed this story <333

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heijihatsutori June 22 2014, 15:41:31 UTC
A reply is a reply nonetheless, regardless of time taken, so thanks again! \O/
Glad that it works! I was worried you'll get more confused with all the explanation OTL
Oh dear you are way too kind! What did I do to deserve this...


... )

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taogei September 17 2015, 19:57:06 UTC
My goodness where do I begin? I haven't written a comment on LJ for years but I felt your story warranted one.

I know I probably failed to be perceptive and understand some things coz I don't understand the link between L & Myungsoo? Did they just happen to look alike? Was Sungyeol sick? And why did Sungjong fire Dongwoo despite knowing the people would be mad at him?

I really really love how you revealed each character slowly. The last part of the story where you retold the first part of the story struck me so hard I swear my heart was thundering in my chest. Howon or Hoya, I hope he finally finds peace.

This was absolutely wonderful. I wish it had more comments and more views coz you deserve to know how amazing you wrote. Thank you for sharing!

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heijihatsutori September 18 2015, 04:13:57 UTC
First of all, thanks a lot for taking the time to comment! I didn't expect people to still read this, so this is a very pleasant surprise. Thank you ( ... )

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