Title: And The Looking Glass Falls (3/3)
Author: Heiji Hatsutori
Length: 7,007 words
Genre: AU, Angst
Pairing: Bandfic
Rating: PG
Summary:There is an old grave digger living on a shack beside the cemetery on the hill. No one knows his name, or how old he is, but he has been there from the start, they say; back when the town was nothing but
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Sorry for making you cry! On the castle part, well, I personally had a hard time writing it, if only for the imagery is too vivid in my mind, and my dongsaeng keeps berating me for making it too depressing OTL
Again, thank you for the kind words, and for giving this piece love! I'll work harder for the next installment! (and stop procrastinating OTL)
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I really liked your narration style, switching back and forth in time, even though it was a little confusing at first. And the fact that you kept the identity of the grave digger till the end...wow that really kept me on my toes guessing who it was. And all the vague references to the different travellers and people along the way, it was a surprise when I read on and found out who they were and what happened to them afterwards!
Just curious though, what happened to Sungjong after the bombing? (or was I too unperceptive to figure that out from your story?)
Anyway I also really liked the context your story is set in as well, I'm totally a sucker for medieval settings:)
Thanks so much for the story! :)))
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thanks for explaining it, it really cleared up the confusion for me!
i just cannot describe how much i like this still, really. i just re-read this, and when you revealed the characters one by one, especially the last section with the grave digger, gosh, it really hit me hard. that moment of realisation and nostalgia that you feel along with the characters...
No other words that can describe how much I enjoyed this story <333
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Glad that it works! I was worried you'll get more confused with all the explanation OTL
Oh dear you are way too kind! What did I do to deserve this...
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I know I probably failed to be perceptive and understand some things coz I don't understand the link between L & Myungsoo? Did they just happen to look alike? Was Sungyeol sick? And why did Sungjong fire Dongwoo despite knowing the people would be mad at him?
I really really love how you revealed each character slowly. The last part of the story where you retold the first part of the story struck me so hard I swear my heart was thundering in my chest. Howon or Hoya, I hope he finally finds peace.
This was absolutely wonderful. I wish it had more comments and more views coz you deserve to know how amazing you wrote. Thank you for sharing!
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