Comments | heiryzmylisza: They Met and Parted (part 2)

heiryzmylisza

They Met and Parted (part 2)

Jun 25, 2008 15:43

Title: They Met and Parted
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Comments 83

massuxshige June 27 2008, 10:12:33 UTC

*speechless*

I seriously cried!
;-;

I loved this story.

heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 12:41:01 UTC

well, i'm glad that you are one of the few who did!!!
ahaha... ^_______^

thanks for adding me up.

sashyacute June 27 2008, 10:33:57 UTC

dearie.... though this fi is emo... I ove you for it ( ... )

sashyacute June 27 2008, 10:36:20 UTC

sorry for the typos, my keyboard isn't in it's best condition ;P

heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 12:46:44 UTC

don't worry, i got what you mean! ^_____^
and that's really nice ne? ahahaha...
and i really love your long comment!!!

oh well, we can't really please everybody right? i decided to write something different and people didn't like it, what can i do right? ahaha... that means more fluff in the future of Sushi!!! lol.

naahhh... i still want to be emo once in awhile. lmao.XD

sashyacute June 28 2008, 04:10:27 UTC

hehehe...

glad that you love the comment ^____^ I don't usually write long ones ne~ since I'm not really good at commenting in words(even though I write fics XDD)

And yeah, we deffinitely can't please everyone. besides, I don't think pleasing people is an author's job ne~ (It's JE boy's job to please people!!! LOL!!) Coz if we write stories based on what and how people want it then it can't be called as our work ;)

So just write whatever you want ok!! even if a fic is emo and really dark, if an author write it well, people will love it ^___^

shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 12:20:00 UTC

umm.. well you asked me to write a comment on this fic so I will XD ( ... )

shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 12:20:42 UTC

*sweatdrop* this is really a long comment 0_o
I'm really sorry about that..... >_< hope you're not annoyed with it....

heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 13:02:23 UTC

eehhh? a BA in literature?
omg... i hope other than this fic, i didn't really fail as a writer...*pouts*

ahaha... i liked the way you analyzed these things... like i said, constructive criticisms help writers ne? i'm glad you told me those things so that in the future i really wouldn't commit the same mistakes again? erm... yeah, i get your point about the explanation thing. i know i'm lacking that one in this fic so i'm planning, i repeat, planning to write a sort of epilogue, if you could call it like that? that would probably explain things? i sure do hope that what i might write would help other readers understand why this fic led to such a tragic end...

and i can't really blame poeple if they don't like what i write, what pains me is just that they have to say it in a very harsh way...

ahaha, i'm so sorry for bothering you early in the morning!!! >____omg. about that one. it's still under construction? with my bday preparations and school stuff, i really can't write something decent with that one. but i do hope that i could ( ... )

shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 13:58:19 UTC

hahaha don't worry I read some other stories from you and I liked them xDDDD Having a BA in lit doesn't mean I'm more strict XDDD I just tend to annalyze XD ( ... )

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huey_tsai June 27 2008, 13:25:43 UTC

uwah, tesshi died HOMG, but yeah, its sad but then again, its good to read a fic that doesnt really have a happy ending once in a while, :D great fic, it made me cry *whentesshidied* yehp, write more!~

heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 13:40:31 UTC

yeah... it's sad ne?
i didn't want to kill tesshi too but with such an atmosphere that i built up, i think it's inevitable for it not to have such a tragic ending... but i'm glad you're also one of the few who did like this fic...

i'm sorry i made you cry!!! tissue? ^____^

huey_tsai June 27 2008, 13:43:41 UTC

thank you, :D but it was great, :D i love u for this, i was kinda deprived of tegomass fics, but now i am deprived of ryotego ahaha

oh yeah, advance happy birthday :D

heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 13:51:44 UTC

ahaha... there's still a drought of tegomass fics here...lol. people should write more about sushi... ehh? ryotego's gone too? what happened to the writers here? ahaha...

thankies!!! ^_______^

laftkeichan June 27 2008, 13:41:05 UTC

hmm...
i like it!
i know it's just a fiction!
and i'm okai with the OOC...

but yeah,
tego done a suicide?
OH really make my heart break,
i really want them to be together...
kyahahahahaha
but still loves it!

and i love how u make each character in a different way,
i don't mind that at all..
because i know that just a fiction,
like what i say before...

don't be sad hunn,
please do not ruin your b'day just because of that!
*HUGS AND MANY MANY KISSES*

nb: keichan? naughty? let me be the girl...
ahahahaha

laftkeichan June 27 2008, 13:56:16 UTC

mmmmm i forgot to say this!
i prefer hanasim poin of view!

cheer up nee~

heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 13:57:57 UTC

thanks for your honest opinion!!! ^_____^
i'm truly glad that you liked it!!!

ne... you shouldn't have thrown away your books!
don't copy me who doesn't like to study! lol.XD

and a million thanks for the hugs and kisses!!!
aawwww... you made me smile again ne?
don't worry, i won't let this ruin my special night...
though it left a scratch?

rofl. i should've mentioned you here then!
i proclaimed myself to be the girl with massu without any hesitation!
though, i really think that it's not something to be proud of! XP
lmao. fan girls with naughty NewS members!!! ^______^

laftkeichan June 27 2008, 14:53:11 UTC

yea,
no prob at all..

kyahahahaha
i know,
but i really need to refresh my mind,
those book really make me want to throw up!
because i don't like to study too i think ^^

owhh naughty NEWS member??
*nosebleed
LOL XDD

good then if u already smile again ^_____^
any way MASSU SHIRTLESS PICT? which pic is that???

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