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helen_halliwell

bar room ghosts

Feb 20, 2010 23:10

bar room ghosts
grey's anatomy - post time warp. spoilers for all of season 6. lexie/mark. one-shot/drabble/ficlet.

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show: grey's anatomy, character: little grey, character: joe the bartender, character: dr. mcsteamy

Comments 13

hollyjo12 February 22 2010, 02:16:32 UTC

Very good characterization. Especially with Lexie's speech to Mark. And I was so happy when he told her that she wasn't a disappointment. Great job!

helen_halliwell February 22 2010, 04:34:35 UTC

Aw thank you! I'm glad you found it in character! (I try!)
I feel like Lexie takes things harder than most people, criticisms especially, so I thought it needed to be said.
Thanks for reading!

lovelylytton February 22 2010, 10:46:15 UTC

Wow, this was magnificent! You created such a perfect atmosphere for this exchange, and I love how their conversation shifts from Sloane to Lexie. Wonderful writing!

helen_halliwell February 25 2010, 02:22:28 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!