Oh so many things to love about this! Hot, adorable, a little messy, a little understated and really wonderful Olivia. I liked the silly drunkenness, it was a nice balance to how serious the show is almost all the time. (I'd really like to see these two have some fun!) The banter was nicely done and made me smile and imagine it. The Charlie and Dylan bits were sweet, and I particularly liked Charlie's comments to Olivia. Simple, but packing a lot of truth.
I could go on with the list, but it would be boring.
I really like these little bits you leave ambigious as well. It gives your stuff its own style and fits with the show, too.
So yeah, this was a very nice treat to reward myself with this evening. Mmm. And thanks for the dedication! I hope you didn't wear yourself out writing, though.
(Just one note - the name of Lloyd's son is spelt Dylan, according to the FF wiki.)
*covers face with hands* I'm super stoked that you liked this!
*grins* My co-workers think I'm crazy now for laughing for no reason! (I swear, I really do work hard!)
I love, love, LOVE that you enjoyed this :) After I finished it, I watched the sneak peek for this week's episode. OH GOD. The Lloyd and Olivia part they showed? I can't even handle it...so excited!
Yes, I decided to get Olivia drunk and loosen her up for once. I hesitated on what would happen afterwords, but figured these two needed to have some fun for once.
There were 2 things I meant to double check: 1. The spelling of Dimitri's name 2. The spelling of Dylan's name. Figures, I'd get one of the two wrong!
Oh yeah, really liked it :) Your writing style agrees with my reading taste, that's for sure. :) And I totally agree that they need some fun. I'd like to see them enjoy a day on the beach or something, or read books to each other in a hammock.
I watched that preview this morning before work and grinned like a loon. They're so cute. Olivia looks dressed like she came for a date or something, too. Can't wait to see the episode! (Sadly I must. Life is so mean.)
I think it's spelt Demetri, IIRC. I used to get it wrong. The FF wiki is a handy resource to check such things, I like it.
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I could go on with the list, but it would be boring.
I really like these little bits you leave ambigious as well. It gives your stuff its own style and fits with the show, too.
So yeah, this was a very nice treat to reward myself with this evening. Mmm. And thanks for the dedication! I hope you didn't wear yourself out writing, though.
(Just one note - the name of Lloyd's son is spelt Dylan, according to the FF wiki.)
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*grins* My co-workers think I'm crazy now for laughing for no reason! (I swear, I really do work hard!)
I love, love, LOVE that you enjoyed this :) After I finished it, I watched the sneak peek for this week's episode. OH GOD. The Lloyd and Olivia part they showed? I can't even handle it...so excited!
Yes, I decided to get Olivia drunk and loosen her up for once. I hesitated on what would happen afterwords, but figured these two needed to have some fun for once.
There were 2 things I meant to double check: 1. The spelling of Dimitri's name 2. The spelling of Dylan's name. Figures, I'd get one of the two wrong!
Thanks again for reading! ♥
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I watched that preview this morning before work and grinned like a loon. They're so cute. Olivia looks dressed like she came for a date or something, too. Can't wait to see the episode! (Sadly I must. Life is so mean.)
I think it's spelt Demetri, IIRC. I used to get it wrong. The FF wiki is a handy resource to check such things, I like it.
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I've become all but obesessed with these two...can't understand why there aren't more people on board!
Thanks for reading!
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