less fortunate saviors

[helen_halliwell]

flashfoward- olivia/lloyd
I just can't get enough of these two, if you couldn't tell. post-course correction. spoilers for everything. this is probably the closest to fluff I'll ever get. takes place immediately after Olivia walks out of Lloyd's house.

Comments

[misscam]

Oh I'm in a hurry since I gotta go to work, but this was a nice thing to wake to. Very, very nice. Loved Lloyd's care and how the kids were involved and how well you touched on Olivia's very understandable exhaustion. Very nice descriptions in it too, weaving the mental images together very well.

The last section was very sweet and hopeful. :)

[helen_halliwell]

Why thank you! I stayed up much too late finishing it when I really should have been sleeping.

I'm going to be extremely bummed if they do end up cancelling this show...it's not looking good :( All I want is one more season at least to tie everything together...I hope at minimum we get that.

I do feel bad for Mark and I'm thinking about writing something from his point of view but these two just suck me back in and I forget all about Mark...one day I'll finish something for him.

Thanks again for reading (especially since you were short on time!) Glad you liked it!

[helen_halliwell]

Aw, thank you! I agree...I don't hate Mark's character...I just never bought into his relationship with Olivia.

I don't even want to talk about this show getting cancelled. Ugh. I would love just ONE more season...I don't think that's too much to ask, but you're right, it's looking like a long-shot.

Thanks again for reading :)

[auroraloo]

Your writing is amazing!
I can visualize everything.
I went back to read your earlier work and you capture them both
beautifully. Thank-you so much for this.
I'm hoping and praying by some miracle that they get a 2nd season.

[helen_halliwell]

Why thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this!

I'm praying with you! It'll be a shame to end this so quickly...

Thank you for reading!