Harry Potter fic: Practice Makes Perfect

[helent]

Yes, I succumbed :) This one is H/Hr ship (and very short), but I'll probably dip a few toes in gen fic too at some point. Back to this one though; I'm hoping like hell that this premise hasn't been done a hundred times already. Also, as I doubt I've many HP fans on my flist this will probably go on a comm too. Sorry if you get it twice. *hugs all

Comments

[moirariordan]

That was perfect. Funny, light, a little angsty. Very in-character, too.

"Oy! How slow do you think I am?"

Hee. That makes me giggle. Nice work! ♥

[helent]

Thanks for the comment! This my first HP fic, so it's hugely reassuring that it reads OK. :P

[damnskippytoo]

That was very sweet and, sadly, I got a little turned on by two teenagers kissing. ;) So I think you did a excellent job!

[helent]

Debs! *tackle and hug*

sadly, I got a little turned on by two teenagers kissing. ;) And I feel properly ashamed of myself for putting you in that position. *g* To make me feel better I hereby solemly swear to keep HP ship fics PG-13 (unless I write future fic).

Thanks for reading, darlin. ♥

[sweet_iolanthe]

hehe. that was adorable. I loved the last thing Harry said. its for a promising future. and Hermione is so sure they will end up together which is good bc they are meant to be. wonderful work.

[helent]

Yay! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting to let me know. :)

[contrary_lady]

Aw, That was so sweet! I'm definitely going to save this one to memories. ♥

[helent]

Hugs you. Save away, hun. Thanks for letting me know you liked it so much.

[kimmy_77]

I love it! Since DH came out I haven't read many fics. I don't really care for affair fics and there are tons of them out right now. But this was completely wonderful! I was so hoping Harry was going to pull her onto his lap. :) Great job! Do you mind if I put this in my memories?

[helent]

Hi there. Thanks for the lovely comment and of course you can save it--I'm chuffed it hit the spot for you. ♥

ETA: Wow! I love your icon. I'm guessing that scene is from an outtake? I don't suppose you could you point me in the direction of where to find it??

[kimmy_77]

venus_ice made that icon, she's brilliant! It's one of the first H/H icons I snagged so it's a few years old. That was when Dan and Emma were practicing for the Yule Ball. You could probably snag it from me just so long as you credit venus_ice. :)

[helent]

Thanks, hun. :)