Comments | helga_b: PoT fic x 2

helga_b

PoT fic x 2

Jan 01, 2006 20:10

First, the request!fic for lios_alfar. Uh, probably not exactly what you were asking for, but... It has Niou and Yagyuu, at least. I'll do something else if you'd like.

Title: Cigars
Rating: PG
Characters: Niou, Yagyuu, Mizuki
Summary: In which Rikkai D1 is analyzed. Kind of.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

( so I've been kind of annoyed at over-analyzing lately. does it show? )

Comments 28

svz_insanity January 1 2006, 21:32:00 UTC

I love your characterization of everyone. Ryoma's proposal to Momo made me laugh out loud-- the poor guy. (Momo certainly seems to get a lot of action.) I'm deathly in love with your Shinji. He's just priceless...

*adds to memories*

helga_b January 2 2006, 09:50:30 UTC

Thank you!

Momo needs to get some action sometimes too, and Shinji's mere existence is priceless. :p

Very Nice! tokagemusume January 1 2006, 21:51:48 UTC

I enjoyed this thoroughly. Your characters just pop to life. My favourite bit...

"...looking at it while she was wearing her hair like this was making him feel somewhat like she was walking around in her underwear. He'd never known necks could do that."

Sweet and so right for the character! Thanks for publishing this!

Re: Very Nice! helga_b January 2 2006, 09:51:13 UTC

Thank you! :)

giving_ground January 1 2006, 22:23:16 UTC

Your D1 made me very, very happy. I have a silly grin now. I like them like that. :) Thank you!

helga_b January 2 2006, 09:52:05 UTC

*relieved that you approve* I wasn't sure this was exactly what you wanted, so.

daburusu January 1 2006, 23:04:34 UTC

Omigosh. MomoKai, MomoRyo, and AtoMomo? Yeah. Me likes. <3.

The Momo stories rocked. ^^.

helga_b January 2 2006, 09:54:54 UTC

Well. Almost MomoRyo, at least. :p

Thank you!

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helga_b January 2 2006, 09:55:20 UTC

Thank you!