Fic: Naruto: Convalescence, TemaShika

[helga_b]

I took today off to write some Naruto fic before I start revising and working on that paper tomorrow.

Comments

[pashoshi]

Pretty. I really like the way you describe the tension between them without pounding the reader over the head with it.

[helga_b]

Thank you!^^

[ballades]

*_*

Yes. Just yes. Spot-on, dead-on, you got it. Thank you.

[helga_b]

Thank you!^^ Glad the characterization is approved of, I was a bit worried about that...

[lazynin]

Shikamaru should never, ever not be capable of not relaxing.

Favorite line.

Other than that, I liked how Temari was bothered by the change in hair length. It seemed suiting.
Overall, it was a very nice read. *_* The characterizations were great. Wondeful to see some nice ShikaTem, since the fandoms had so few contributions lately.

[helga_b]

Thank you! :)

I sort of exist only on the fringes of this fandom, so I'm not sure just how much ShikaTema there is out there. I'm sure it can't possibly be enough, though. ;)

[ballades]

There isn't enough, but there are some really good things. A lot of us have taken to putting the good ShikaTema fics in our memories, so if you do a bit of hunting around you'll find fics.

[helga_b]

I think I'm going to have to give that a try. :)

[katya_jule]

I love Shikamaru's slightly sarcastic lines and the way you describe everything. I also think I have a lot more to say but no idea how to say it. Cheers.

[helga_b]

Thank you! :)

[_acerbitas_]

What a nice, cute story! It's so hard to think of Shikamaru without hair. O.O *thinks hard* Wow, I hope it grows back in. I liked this story, and it isn't like a lot of ShikaTema stories I've read. ^__^ It's good!

[helga_b]

Thank you!^^