16. Wonderland

Jan 14, 2010 10:19


With careful effort, I kneel down next to him and hold his head in my lap.  Gently, I pet his wet, sticky hair and try to wipe the blood off his pallid cheek with my trembling fingers.  One dark eye rolls up to look at me vacantly and then rolls back up in his head.  My body is taught and prickly with the adrenaline that's beginning to course ( Read more... )

necessary voodoo: 1. via negativa

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disco_trash August 30 2009, 18:26:55 UTC
my god i cant wait to see what happened.

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hellaine August 31 2009, 01:04:30 UTC
:)

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pink_rose09 August 30 2009, 18:51:31 UTC
i agree with the comment above me!

"but now I was making crazy deals in my head with whatever God there was."
definitely feel ya on that one.

<3

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hellaine August 30 2009, 23:24:45 UTC
i feel bad, but i'm such a fair-weather friend to god. i only ever seem to be talking to him when it gets me somewhere.

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hellaine August 30 2009, 23:23:27 UTC
bringin' the ~*~drama~*~

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passionfillled August 31 2009, 10:44:03 UTC
I'd never prayed before, but now I was making crazy deals in my head with whatever God there was.

I loved this line.

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hellaine August 31 2009, 14:27:10 UTC
hee, thanks :)

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hellaine August 31 2009, 21:17:02 UTC
thanks--i'm trying to learn to stretch my lil' writing legs further.

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