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Apr 25, 2006 21:15

DOES THIS PARAGRAPH MAKE SENSE ( Read more... )

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graceless_gh April 25 2006, 21:21:25 UTC
You might just want to expand on the unrest caused by religion, just so people who aren't familiar with the period know what you mean (dates/or jusy year of birth might be useful). You might also want to clarify, or perhaps elucidate on the paradoxical nature of his youth/upbringing.

Otherwise a very neat paragraph setting out the basics of the socio-economic background.

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hellice April 26 2006, 07:12:22 UTC
thank you :) i've put his dates right at the beginning but i've done a bit more reading on it now so have plenty more to add!

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xfesseyx April 25 2006, 22:30:46 UTC
Olly Truant is not going to be there.

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mintyblue April 26 2006, 07:10:46 UTC
it makes sense to me, well as in the words make sense. i have no idea what they actually mean though, i have turned off most of my brain since graduating.

are you coming on saturday?? what is this thing on sunday? i am intrigued.... !x

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hellice April 26 2006, 08:06:17 UTC
I have been invited to TWO!! (yes, two) parties on saturday...one is my anthropology buddies celebrating end of exams, the others is yours. I don't know what to do....or whether I shouldn't really go out at all and have a night in chilaxing (which I haven't had for 2 weeks). decisions decisions. sunday is this alldayer in nottingham with the legacy, raise the white flag, hangover heartattack, turn cold the permanent...and others. YOU SHOULD GO!!!! x

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