the way this reads makes it seem like it was written with a lot of feeling behind it, i think it comes from your repitition of words in certain places, its lyrical in a way and deserves to be spoken lovely :)
a new look at cliches
anonymous
April 23 2005, 02:48:48 UTC
im a starving artist starved for art that i a) understand b) appreciate c) moves I know you find so much in everything, in just small snippets of converstaion, but i personally am starved for poetry and art and people that want to be fed too
thus your writing, be it poetry or prose is dark and ethereal old soul and skeptic young and untamed absolutly wonderful
i wish i could write as much as you do, with livejournal and photography and all the other medias that you render beautiful
the funny thing is, we dont know eachother, and yet, there is something about you that i know and that is your language and some of your messages (for i know in the short times we see eachother we dont get everything haha)
i have returned from lincoln center today and the moral of my story, after seeing a horrible gallery and a wonderful one is that you should continue
Re: a new look at clicheshelloeliseApril 23 2005, 12:21:44 UTC
! thank you. writing can get disheartening sometimes, you know? but then when i finally throw in the towel i realize i need to get all that dust thats been accumulating out. but thank you so much- i really really appreciate it. i saw the title of the comment and i was like oh god someone hated this poem. nice surprise. anyways...thanks. a huge amount. nice to get feedback (especially nice feedback, not going to lie.) and youll find a way. when people need to write, they always do.
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lovely :)
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its a bit of a dream of mine to read poetry aloud. it was written with a lot of feeling. a lot -
friday!
lovelise
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starved for art that i
a) understand
b) appreciate
c) moves
I know you find so much in everything, in just small snippets of converstaion, but i personally am starved for poetry and art
and people that want to be fed too
thus
your writing, be it poetry or prose is
dark and ethereal
old soul and skeptic
young and untamed
absolutly wonderful
i wish i could write as much as you do, with livejournal and photography and all the other medias that you render beautiful
the funny thing is, we dont know eachother, and yet, there is something about you that i know
and that is your language and some of your messages (for i know in the short times we see eachother we dont get everything haha)
i have returned from lincoln center today
and the moral of my story, after seeing a horrible gallery and a wonderful one
is that you should continue
ya
-caitlin shea
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but thank you so much- i really really appreciate it. i saw the title of the comment and i was like oh god someone hated this poem.
nice surprise.
anyways...thanks. a huge amount. nice to get feedback (especially nice feedback, not going to lie.) and youll find a way. when people need to write, they always do.
lovelise
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