Monster Mash: Dance of the Damned [Chapter 2]

Jun 30, 2011 23:30

Title: Monster Mash: Dance of the Damned 1

Characters: Alfred, Vash, Francis, Arthur, Matthew's coven

Rating: 15 for this chapter.

Warnings: Blood, violence, heavily implied child abuse.

Summary: Sequel to Monster Mash. Memories restored, Francis goes looking for his lost love, in the hope she too is looking for him. Elsewhere, Arthur learns ( Read more... )

fanfiction, dance of the damned, monster series, hetalia

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megkips June 30 2011, 22:36:17 UTC
DAMN I was hoping for Feliks this chapter. Alas--

1. Alfred, you fucking creeper
2. Vash, you really need a vacation.
3. Actually, just loved the whole hunter scene - a lovely snap shot of the day to day stuff.
4. babbiessssssssssss

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hellzabeth June 30 2011, 22:38:51 UTC
I like to dangle the nicest bits just out of your reach for a little longer.

1: it's what he does
2: oh my god he probably has so much built up vacation time
3: I have built up a weird affection for the hunters thanks to you gdi
4: it's a fic by me you knew there would be babies eventually

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megkips June 30 2011, 22:39:53 UTC
carrot and stick? CURSE YOU.

1. /just wants to shoop Al doing the creep now
2. VASH HONEY USE IT I SWEAR IT'LL BE FINE
3. ......you made me like them in the first place so i blame you in return
4. B| true

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hellzabeth July 2 2011, 11:27:06 UTC
You're making me think of that song that Bela and Ukraine sang...

1: do it
2: NO IT WON'T HE'LL COME BACK AND THE VATICAN WILL BE A CRUMBLING PILE OF DUST
3: We can play the blame game all day my dear
4: B|b

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myfuckinglestat July 1 2011, 00:02:19 UTC
I knew it!! Alfred is specializing!! I wonder if there will be a day when he goes and fights Arthur Q-Q, but the russian bear Oh the possibilities!! moarr!!

Arthur is kinda nostalgic in this one, he reeks of motherly instinct <3

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hellzabeth July 2 2011, 11:22:21 UTC
I wouldn't call it specialising, he's just the needed muscle to bring down this werebear. |Db

He is such a dad idefk. Stop getting mushy over kids that aren't yours Arthur.

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candelaria July 1 2011, 17:01:19 UTC
LKSDJFLF YOU KNOW WHAT. Alfred reminds me of Jake Martinez now and I am crying. But at the same time I am imagining them keeping him in a holding cell like that, AND IT GIVES ME A LITTLE RELIEF FROM THE CREEPER VIBES sob. ;; Oh Vash, bless your long-suffering attitude. I wouldn't underestimate the number of guns he could keep in those puffy sleeves. And a Russian werebear mission sldfjldkjf /SCREAM. THIS SHOULD BE INTERESTING.

I feel sorry for the body Francis had that is going to wake up in Poland with NO IDEA over how it got there ffff. |D; And slkdfj GRANDPA ARTHUR AND BABBIES. I am going to die of cute bawww. ;AAA; The most indulgent and no-nonsense grandfather I can't. Arthur your age is showing. ;3; Oh Matthew, you still don't have this "dad" thing down pat quite yet, BUT DON'T WORRY. You'll get there! Very different approaches to parenting, I see them... |D

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hellzabeth July 2 2011, 11:25:47 UTC
.... LOL WHY DID YOU SAY IT NOW I CAN'T UNSEE IT IN MY MIND. He's in a holding cell, yeah, but do you really think that could keep him in there. God bless you Vash, you go through so much. |D;;;; He has like, hammerspace full of guns it's crazy. RUSSIAN WEREBEAR WOO. INTERESTING DOESN'T EVEN BEGIN TO COVER IT.

I think the funniest thing about this chapter is that EVERYONE I have talked to feels sorry for the random guy that Francis left in a field. He probably has a map in the car or something idefk, Francis doesn't think of these things. GRANDPA ARTHUR, DELIVERER OF DISCIPLINE WHERE MATTHEW FAILS TO DO SO. They would probably argue about it if Matthew wasn't so nice and Arthur wasn't so reserved.

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closeincline July 3 2011, 00:03:30 UTC
wow, I hadn't realized more had been written on this story... I love it and totally missed it! So glad to see more!!! Thanks for posting!!!

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thera7 July 3 2011, 21:44:28 UTC
Woot, glad to see this updated!

Haha, it's always incredible to see such a terrifying Alfred who is so much brawn and BRAINS too. People always forget that, and you've done it extremely well, as always, my dear! :D

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