Monster Mash: Dance of the Damned [Chapter 4]

Aug 25, 2011 01:14

Title: Monster Mash: Dance of the Damned 4

Characters: Francis, Toris, Feliks, Arthur, Matthew

Rating: 15 for this chapter.

Warnings: Crazy family trees, SHOCKING REVELATIONS, Feliks being Feliks.

Summary: Sequel to Monster Mash. Memories restored, Francis goes looking for his lost love, in the hope she too is looking for him. Elsewhere, ( Read more... )

fanfiction, dance of the damned, monster series, hetalia

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megkips August 25 2011, 00:21:01 UTC
LHM\DFAJASFAGK

THE ENDING OH

oh yes.

benebenbebene

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hellzabeth August 25 2011, 09:24:58 UTC
I'm glad you like bb <3 I knew you would.

You just remind me of those birds in Finding Nemo with your bene bene bene.

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megkips August 25 2011, 15:41:03 UTC
I'm obvious. And actually I was expecting a different reveal on the photographs - not Alfred at all!

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hellzabeth August 25 2011, 15:46:05 UTC
Look up, apparently I am an idiot and didn't post the whole chapter. FUCK YOU 1AM.

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thera7 August 25 2011, 01:39:19 UTC
Good to see you again!

OH GOD, IT'S ALL SO CLEAR NOW!

Seriously though, that was a surprise which I should have seen staring me sraight in the face... I like it very much! And yes, the Hunters' HQ does indeed qualify as a 'mental institute' in more ways than one...

Haha, call waiting, Feliks.

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hellzabeth August 25 2011, 09:27:16 UTC
WE CAN SEE CLEARLY NOW THE RAIN HAS GOOOOONE.

I have been hiding this up my sleeve since about the mid-point of the last Monster Mash, actually. I'm glad I managed to pull it off. Haha, they're really not aware of where Alfred is.

You are in a queue. Please hold.

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myfuckinglestat August 25 2011, 02:03:24 UTC
OMG
OMG
OMG

this is it...Its taking form!!! mmm Alfred turned vampire? sorry but my mind went straight to my USUK filled mental images of yaoi...

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hellzabeth August 25 2011, 09:28:46 UTC
He's not really a vampire right now, he just has leftover instincts and "Hunger" from his ancestor. ^^

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candelaria August 25 2011, 03:48:55 UTC
FUUUUUUUUU - FUUUUUUUUUUUU-

GODDAMMIT FELIKS DO YOU HAVE A HOTLINE OR SOMETHING, I CAN'T. You know now that I think about it, I'm honestly surprised that neither side has killed Feliks at some point or another to prevent him leaking information back to the "other side". He must be too valuable to kill. 8|a Or they think he has some years left in him before his "expiry date" /shot

Oh god oh god crazy vampire genes noooo. SO ALFRED II HAS OLD BLOOD. THIS MAKES EVERYTHING BETTER. REALLY. AND THE HUNTERS JUST LET HIM INTO THEIR INNER CIRCLE AND EVERYTHING. FUN TIMES FOR ALL.

Also had this completely unrelated and silly vision of Gab as Rumpelstiltskin. No one can know his real name or it would give them power over him. YOU HAVE 3 DAYS TO GUESS, IN WHICH HE WILL TAKE POTSHOTS AT YOU FOR EVERY ONE YOU GET WRONG. /I mean, what

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megkips August 25 2011, 05:02:11 UTC
CANDE LET'S AGREE ON ONE THING

feliks is the real star of this thing

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candelaria August 25 2011, 14:02:05 UTC
HONESTLY MEG AT THIS POINT I THINK FELIKS COULD GET AWAY WITH HIS OWN AUTOBIOGRAPHY, A MOVIE BASED ON HIS LIFE AND STILL HAVE TIME TO PEN THE MOST VALUABLE STUD BOOKS FOR BREEDING FAT PONIES IN EUROPE.

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megkips August 25 2011, 15:42:12 UTC
AND HE WOULD ENJOY EVERY MINUTE OF IT AND BE FABULOUS WHILE DOING SO. EVERYONE ELSE CAN ONLY STARE AND BE JELLY

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tuulensisko August 25 2011, 03:53:55 UTC
HEY THERE YOU. o/ Long time no see!

OHHHHHHHH IT ALL MAKES SO MUCH MORE SENSE NOW. I admit, I was so confused about Alfred before, even if he was a reincarnation, why was he so crazy and bloodlusty when the original Alfred wasn't but... damn, I kinda feel like I should have guessed something like this but I totally did not. But it does explain a lot. He's human, but he's also part human-vampire or something like that. And holy shit that's pretty damn scary, actually. He's really a terrifying being. Poor Alfred Kirkland, he probably never meant this to happen...

Also this explains why Matthew was not-so-surprised to meet Alfred...

What about human!Matt, though? Is it also because of the connection to ex-vamp!Alfred?

Oh and Francis in his real form! ♥ (You know, I've been waiting for that to happen. And with the arrow and all, perfect. xD Poor Toris.) That reminds me... I've been meaning to ask: does Phillipe look anything like the original Francis?

I also love that Francis doesn't care so much for revenge as finding Jeanne. ;;__;;

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tuulensisko August 25 2011, 03:55:33 UTC
Oh and I forgot that THEY STILL THINK ALFRED IS IN A MENTAL INSTITUTE. OH SHIT.

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hellzabeth August 25 2011, 09:51:05 UTC
\o/ Heeeeeey I am alive ( ... )

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tuulensisko August 25 2011, 10:39:04 UTC
Oh damn, you're right. o__o;;; His genes might be all over the place. Everybody is fuuucked. W-well, at least Alfred II himself doesn't seem too interested in reproducing (... I hope. *shudder*) and Matt II and Annie are dead... So that's hopefully one branch that got cut off.

Franciiiisss why are you so adorable in thiiiiisss?? >_>♥ This of all the possible fics...

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