dented dreams, and diluted memories...

[helterskelter19]

this is an old poem that i recently found. a friend of mine wrote.. its really well written, and i dunno its pretty deep shit so i thought id post it

trapped in a box

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[backinblack23]

Yoink yoink...those were some sad times indeed! I dont even have that poem anymore lol :)

[helterskelter19]

yeah that was bad times for all but it seems some stuff has turned around nowa'days... i have another one of ur poems if you would u like to have it

[helterskelter19]

I’m holding on to everything.

Nothing will let go

Forever trapped in this 3 dimensional space

I'll never come out, no one will come in

Don’t feel bad, don’t make me laugh.

I’m peeled, picked apart and eaten.

Each day another part of me turns to stone, another thing turns grey

I’m tired of hiding it, I’m sick of pretending

Nothing will come back, everything is gone

I am a dove with no nest

I am flower with no petals

I am that man with no sight.

I will never see in color, always see in grey

Wont see happiness, it fails to come my way.

My box won’t let me out, won’t let anyone in

Thousand of people talk, but I can’t make out a word

Thousands of people stare, but I can’t see the eye

I’m fading fast, waiting on a bed of nails

For you I could wait a lifetime.

[backinblack23]

this one has the ring of a pinkfloyd song... dontca think?