Comments | henrika_amanda: FIC: Brother's Keeper, pairing Nathan/Peter, NC-17, chapter 22

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FIC: Brother's Keeper, pairing Nathan/Peter, NC-17, chapter 22

Dec 26, 2009 22:43

Title: Brother's Keeper

Authors: henrika_amanda & pilar_sama

Rating: Eventually NC-17

Pairing: Nathan/Peter… and more in future chapters

Summary: The year Peter graduates high school, his big brother Nathan takes him out on a 3-week long camping trip… which will forever change the lives of them both.

Disclaimer: No rights, no income. We’re just a pair of poor students ( Read more... )

Comments 5

sakura_no_mi December 27 2009, 00:46:58 UTC

I can't stop smiling at the image of Peter jacking off in bed next to his "sleeping" brother. I know it seems weird, but I'm just really happy for him that he's making progress :)

Love the graphic too. The shadows and reflection off the tiled floor are so cool!

henrika_amanda December 28 2009, 18:32:24 UTC

Thanks a lot. :) I spent many hours on the graphic, so I'm glad it turned out OK.

I can't stop smiling at the image of Peter jacking off in bed next to his "sleeping" brother. I know it seems weird, but I'm just really happy for him that he's making progress :)

Well, he is a teenage boy. And all those hormones have got to go somewhere. :) Especially as the subject of his crush is lying right next to him. LOL

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henrika_amanda December 28 2009, 18:32:37 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you do. :)

chibiariane December 27 2009, 19:05:44 UTC

Awww, poor Peter. D: I felt so sorry for him having his foot injured. Buuut Nathan's always there to help him! Tadadaa! *superhero sound* :D

The way Nathan held him made him feel as though a superhero had saved him from some possibly life-threatening disaster. Nathan was always his hero in earlier years, and as he could see now, the man still remained so.

I loved that. The relationship of Nathan and Peter you portray is so fitting and you two describe it perfectly.
Peter's progress is great, even if there are of course some sad incidents. It's so interesting to see how their relationship develops and how Peter tries to be like he was before the camping but can't right now. And Nathan is so loving it always warms my heart. :)

The graphic is great. I love the reflections, too. Very impressive. You have to invest much time to make such a graphic, do you? Peter looks so cute. Aww. I love his hair. And you even included his mutilated ear! Great! :D

pilar_sama December 28 2009, 22:33:29 UTC

Thanks very much. It's an interesting challenge with how far to take Peter's actions and reactions. All healing takes time after all, even when it isn't physical.

Henrika has been working with Poser for a few years now and I don't know how long it took her to do this one in total, but probably a lot less time than I could. ;) She's very good at it.