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Mar 06, 2007 22:09


When Things Were Sweet and Good

I know what the foreign hair ribbon

curled like a pink satin cobra

under our bathroom sink

means.

Remember when I told you I was seven,

And how I told you how I grew up a swamp baby.

How Jess and I would play Indians in the stinking mud

And the honeysuckle vines that weren’t honeysuckle,

instead red trumpets of poison ( Read more... )

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lovebettie March 7 2007, 04:14:42 UTC
beautiful- i esp. love the 1st stanza. xo

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plathsrevenge March 7 2007, 07:05:52 UTC
um. um. um. this made me hold my breath up until the very end,
and then i let out a great big whoosh of air.
wow. wow.

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alligator_shoes March 7 2007, 16:50:15 UTC
pretty like a movie

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skinarchitect March 7 2007, 21:13:00 UTC
lovely. ♥

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