Late Nights (2/2)

Nov 21, 2009 13:55

Title: Late Nights (2/2)
Pairing: Lightman/Foster
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Something passed over Gillian’s face, making Cal’s heart rate pick up a notch. He didn’t know what he had just seen. Well, he did know, but he couldn’t be right. There was no way Gillian Foster was aroused.

When Cal strolled into the Lightman Group building the next morning, he ( Read more... )

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wickedground November 22 2009, 09:51:13 UTC
oh this was hot and dirty, sweet and funny. I keep complaining that there's not enough good smut in this fandom (people let them take it slow way too often xD), so this is a welcomed exception :D Keep on writing (I want to see the "getting home" part ^^). Good job on the character voices and the use of BE language.

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her_pseudonym November 22 2009, 21:58:17 UTC
Part of the reason I decided to start writing in this fandom was the relative lack of smut. lol. It's something I love to write, and I'm such a Cal/Gillian fan, it seemed only natural to try and write the kind of story I wanted to read about them. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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sunspawn November 22 2009, 11:15:08 UTC
I already reviewed this on ff.net but i am SO glad you've decided to post here as well. Are you going to post your other story here as well?

This was so gloriously hot, I can't even begin to describe it haha. There isn't nearly enough (good) smut in this fandom, so I'm really glad you're here now!! :D

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her_pseudonym November 22 2009, 22:00:08 UTC
Thanks for the second review. ;) I'm a little hesitant about my other story, to be honest. It's so very dark, and was a bit of a departure for me (in the sense that I never imagined tackling a fan fiction trope that often comes off badly or offends), so it'll take a real bout of courage to decide to bring that one over here. I did get good comments on ff.net, though, so perhaps I will.

"Gloriously hot"...I like that. Thank you!

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sunspawn November 22 2009, 22:08:22 UTC
Yeah, it is pretty dark so I can see why you wouldn't just throw that one out here. I liked it a lot though. It was like, what could've happened during 'Honey' if LTM had been on HBO or Showtime :P

It's just such a relief to finally get some really good smut for this fandom because there isn't a whole lot, sadly. They're two hot people, obviously into each other and hey! single, even! What's stopping people :( /minirant

Also, i really loved how you worked in their 'reading skills' into the story. There's always the whole "you have to tell your partner what you like blah blah blah", but they don't have to because they can just see every teeny tiny reaction. It's fascinating, really.

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lunalove24 November 22 2009, 14:31:22 UTC
Okay, so it took me about 2 hours to, erm, collect myself enough to be able to review this... *blushes*

The writing is amazing and I love how you describe their fears, hopes and reactions - very realistic.

Fantastic, and can I get some more?? ;)

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her_pseudonym November 22 2009, 22:01:25 UTC
LOL. I hope those were a pleasant two hours, at least. ;)

Thanks for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate it. I'm not sure whether I'll continue this story, per se, but I think it's safe to say that I'm not done writing about Cal and Gillian yet...

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her_pseudonym November 24 2009, 18:19:11 UTC
Thanks so much for the comments. So many nice adjectives...you know how to make me smile. :)

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tenbrook November 23 2009, 11:00:57 UTC
That was............AMAAZZING OMG.

*fans self*

I agree with everyone else: you simply must write more! :)

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her_pseudonym November 24 2009, 18:19:38 UTC
Thank you. *blush*

I'm definitely planning to write more. I love this pairing.

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