fic: overachievers

[herbalistic]

overachievers
hp, tom riddle/minerva mcgonagall, 1169 words, pg-13.
his lips are softer, warmer, than she expected, and when her hand stills against his neck she can feel a pulse.

Comments

[featherxquill]

Very nice. I love the style of this, the short sections like punctuation points in a life or a relationship. Wonderfully dark and evocative.

[herbalistic]

Thank you so much!

[jackassing]

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[herbalistic]

ILY ILY ILY ♥

but yes, I'm really really glad you liked it

[minervas_eule]

You had my rapped attention from beginning to end! *wow*
I do love the style with all these short scenes. And your side-characters like Muriel or Dippet are very well portrait as well.
Great job!!

[herbalistic]

Oh, you're making me blush. Thank you ♥

[songquake]

Oh, wonderful. I love the style of this, and I have a particular fondness for stories involving Minerva and her cohort (though there are far too few of them!). It's creepy and erotic...creepily erotic, perhaps. The push-and-pull, attraction-repulsion, is so artfully written.

Thanks ever so for the story!

[herbalistic]

I never understood why there isn't more fic for that WW2 generation. You've got Minerva, Riddle, Augusta Longbottom, Great Aunt Muriel, there's this entire generation which no-one seems all that fussed about. Which, when you think that they were at Hogwarts in the midst of WW2/Grindelwald's war, I find surprising, because you'd think fandom would be all over that.

Thank you ♥

[squibstress]

Love the seemingly random (though not at all, really) snapshots of Minerva's relationship with Riddle and Dumbledore.

I found Dippet's easy dismissal almost as chilling as the dynamic between Minerva and Riddle.

Nicely done!

[herbalistic]

Thanks ever so much ♥