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herdinator

INNER-CITY HEAT

Oct 31, 2008 14:55

The chatter of trees is not to be heard
Nature's wisdom hidden in the cracks of pathways
A long Crown Street-where I see no bird.
Its affection an emptiness that is given
To the workers and down and out.

Ideas and thoughts melt in sweat;
Scent now odour
Within this summer heat in spring.
Sentences in limbo inside my head
Their meanings taken out of context
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uni break 08-09

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michaelgriffith November 25 2008, 00:33:21 UTC

I didn't find the best entry you wanted me to look at for weeks 6 to 12... but overall this is an outstanding LiveJournal Ian... it really seems to have given you the space to take off as a creative writer. Fabulous. Well done. I hope I can see this work growing and developing next semester
MG

My best for week 6-12 herdinator November 26 2008, 21:30:32 UTC

Hi Michael,
Fanatastic play on Tuesday evening at Mission Australia. Anyway my best for week 6-12 was the poem;
'Anarchy: What was the Question?'
thanx for your kind remarks for my journal too. during the break I will be trying erotica goth female verses. lol
Don't worry they will be going on my Bebo page.
See Ya Later.