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[hereforthefood]

I'm working on this paper for English and I'm making it way harder than it needs to be. I don't have the background to successfully complete my essay in the scope I have it right now.

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[geekischic]

What exactly do you want comments on? Content or just general commentary?

[hereforthefood]

Whatever you think would help. I'm looking for constructive comments, mostly.

[grizzlyeric]

First paragraph, second sentence: I would change it to "Burroughs’ life, whether related anecdotally or biographically, often overshadows his work and therefore must be taken into account for any discussion of his work." or something like that, it is much stronger

[hereforthefood]

Thank you, Eric! I'm a little bit further on now and realizing that my structure and direction really are a problem. I think I'm going to go back to this beginning and try to reorganize it.