PotC - Christmas Celebrations

Dec 30, 2010 19:02

Title: Christmas Celebrations
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Disney's. I don't own it. No infringement is intended and no profit is made.
Author's note: A drabble and a half written for the Twelve Days of Christmas at blackpearlsails. Thanks to geekmama for looking it over.

Christmas Celebrations )

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geekmama December 30 2010, 18:32:43 UTC
Not what she'd planned for herself, perhaps, but happiness is where one finds it. I love the way the "rattle of coins and beads" presages that return to what's real and here and now.

Beautifully written, as always.

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hereswith December 30 2010, 21:43:19 UTC
Thank you. *hugs*

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whensheflies December 30 2010, 18:43:31 UTC
Such a lovely little story. Your writing is very poetic. Thanks for sharing!

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hereswith December 30 2010, 21:43:57 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting :-) I'm glad you liked it!

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hendercats December 30 2010, 19:06:46 UTC
Beautiful! Your Jack voice is still pitch perfect, and his mannerisms are as well. I love Lizzie missing the cold and snow, and her memories of the holidays back in England, and the wistful, fleeting memory of the dancing.

Firelight and promises is marvelous, and I just adore this:
she trusted him not a whit and with her life. *applause*

(you do know how terrified I am about trying to write here again, don't you?)

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hereswith December 30 2010, 21:50:31 UTC
Oh, thank you for saying that, I was so worried about them again. And your feedback, as always, is treasured.

You'll do a wonderful job, I don't doubt that for a minute. But I certainly know how you feel, and if you need a hand to hold from afar, I'm here!

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just_a_dram December 30 2010, 19:07:31 UTC
"she trusted him not a whit and with her life"

Ohhh, I love that. This is a marvelous little fic.

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hereswith December 30 2010, 21:52:46 UTC
I'm happy you thought so. Thanks for commenting :-)

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whitemunin December 30 2010, 19:09:42 UTC
Lovely!

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hereswith December 30 2010, 21:57:18 UTC
Thanks so much!

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