Firefly - Shadowed Heart

Jul 30, 2009 19:35

Title: Shadowed Heart
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The characters and settings referred to here are not mine, they belong to Joss. No infringement is intended and no profit is made.
Author's note: Another piece written for a prompt at comment_fic. Set some time after the movie. With thanks to geek_mama_2 for beta reading.

Shadowed Heart )

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hendercats July 31 2009, 14:33:20 UTC
“Like, is it? Same as horses, or chocolate?”
“You’re nicer to kiss, and you taste better. Mostly.”
Hmmm... does that mean he tastes better than the chocolate ... or a horse? *snort* Sorry. *giggle* Very sorry. Just couldn't resist, considering that she seems to look at things in such an odd fashion sometimes.

It's dear and lovely and sad, and it's such a treat to see you've written something! *hugs*

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hereswith August 1 2009, 20:08:57 UTC
I was thinking she meant chocolate, but it could be either, I suppose, depending. *g*

The prompts over at the comm have jogged my muses somewhat, at least, for which I'm grateful, and I appreciate your encouragement so much, you know that. *hugs back*

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tinpra July 31 2009, 17:19:49 UTC
I've missed your Mal/River fics. They're always...just so. Part of what I appreciate about your writing, on a more technical front, is that this is really a short story, not just a WIP-y vignette masquerading as something complete. It's not just a piece of a thought, even though it's pretty short.

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hereswith August 1 2009, 22:18:36 UTC
It's really nice to know that you've missed my M/R stories! Thank you for telling me and for commenting on what you appreciate about my writing as well.

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jenthegypsy July 31 2009, 17:56:07 UTC
So very lovely, even though tinged in sadness. The dancer, triggering memories for River, leaves such a complete image and, as always, the way you write Mal and River together is unimpeachable. I've missed hearing their voices through your words, dear friend. You do it so very, very well! ♥

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hereswith August 1 2009, 22:39:57 UTC
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, and for your kind words. It makes me happy that you liked this. ♥

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cymbeline July 31 2009, 22:02:57 UTC
So haunting and beautiful. With a bit of silly. Thanks for writing!

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hereswith August 1 2009, 22:57:53 UTC
Thank you for reading, I'm very glad you liked this!

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foxrafer August 1 2009, 01:11:45 UTC
The feel, the voices, all of it wonderful.

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hereswith August 1 2009, 22:58:13 UTC
Thanks so much :-)

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