[SMAPfic] Dirty

May 05, 2011 00:25

→ I swear the title is not a blatant one-word summary sorry?

Dirty

2top; pg13; 615 words | Showers are his best friends. )

not on crack i'm on smap, ❤ 2top, writing, this is fanfiction

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faiee May 5 2011, 13:06:54 UTC
This is epicly adorable <3 And snarky in a totally Nakai way <333333

I love you and it was totally worth posting because the world needs more cute, sexy 2top stories. :D I must say though, I'm entirely surprised cute came from you :DDDD But pleasantly so.

Though, the title was misleading ;)

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 13:20:22 UTC
aw, thank you, bb. And snarky in a totally Nakai way <- this makes me feel proud. :D

I strongly believe the world needs more just SEXY 2top stories, but the occasional cute is not bad either. maybe not from me, though. and I assure you I am more surprised myself.
join the trend? write some 2top for us? 8DDD

you know, for all the times your titles/first sentences misled me...
ilu2~

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monstakarotte May 5 2011, 14:49:36 UTC
haha, Nakai is so adorable ♥
and he so can't refuse Kimura ~love that <3

thanks for the story =D

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 21:52:32 UTC
because, in the end, who could refuuuuuse? XD

thank you for commenting, bb. ^.^

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hpswf1 May 6 2011, 16:30:49 UTC
>because the fact that Kimura is naked is quite normal
I want naked Kimura in my life too xDDD

>All the filth of the world is burning through his skin.
poor Nakai ;))

>Nakai considers. He’s just showered, but then again, you can never have enough showers, ever.
And with the way he can see the water dripping down Kimura’s body, he thinks showers are really his best friends.
Like this part ^o^

Thank you for 2TOP's fic!! <333

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hereticpop May 6 2011, 21:25:01 UTC
*sigh* everyone should get some naked Kimura in their lives, the world would be a better place then. ;)

thank you for commenting. <3

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gratiela May 20 2011, 12:33:13 UTC
and he has a growing suspicion there was nothing after that. They just fell asleep.

THEY JUST FELL ASLEEP!! AHAHAHAHA THE HORROR OF DIRTY LEAKED BODY FLUIDS
I mean *cough* .. poor Nakai, he must be terrified, it's a bad sensation... But I can't stop thinking it's too funny!<3333

The mismatching arm OMG, wonderful!<3333333333

I approve so much of morning sex I can't even!!
! And your original plan of "fuck me" sounded even more delicious fasdagagdfh!! Something about assertive sexy creatures voicing out their smugnessssssss and insatiability!


... )

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hereticpop May 20 2011, 23:22:27 UTC
I approve so much of morning sex I can't even!!
8DDD OH, YOU. <3

And your original plan of "fuck me" sounded even more delicious fasdagagdfh!! Something about assertive sexy creatures voicing out their smugnessssssss and insatiability!
you have no idea how torn I am with these things. on one hand, I love slutty!Kimura, and generally slutty characters [but slutty!Kimura most of all XD], but there's a difference between an in-control-sluttiness and submissive sluttiness and I'm always afraid I might not make it clear enough [because when do I make anything clear in my writing?]. i'm rambling at you, but i have encountered this problem again with the fic i am writing right now and i've been wondering if it's not gonna be interpreted weirdly. alright, i really don't know what i am trying to say.

thank you and i'm happy it cheered you up, that's the main purpose of its silliness, i guess. XD

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tsuristyle June 3 2011, 01:37:04 UTC
Hee, this was totally hilarious and I can so picture Nakai freaking out like that. XD

(but oh my god I can relate to this far more than is probably normal. especially the kissing thing >.<)

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hereticpop June 3 2011, 23:17:52 UTC
yay! <3

[I can understand this freakiness, but I definitely can't relate. sadly. I think it wouldn't be a bad thing. :P]

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