[smapfic] Adagio

[hereticpop]

dedicated to all the kimutsu shippers on my flist, in particular g_pumpkin and tsuristyle
with huge thanks to dictionarysays for the betareading and flailing

Adagio

Comments

[tsuristyle]

oh god oh god oh god I have no coherency left (just a heart broken into a thousand little pieces)

(I guess should have read that warning that said this was angst)

Alright, first and foremost I have to say OMG EPIC KIMUTSU FROM YOU YESSSSSSSSS :DDDDDD

And the second thing I have to say is GODDAMMIT NAKAI BREAK HIS NOSE ANYWAY although you probably didn't intend for that reaction :P But how else can I feel when Tsu is still hopeless and wistful and thinking of Kimura and his radio doesn't work when Kimura isn't there and the only glimmer of hope they possibly had slipped away long ago? ;-;
(Then I went and watched that pussuma where Tsu gets to throw pies in Kimura's face and it was very cathartic.)

My own biased reactions aside, this was beautiful and sexy and awkward and sad and full of moments that lingered with me long after--
he’s just ripped a raw piece of truth off and threw it at Kimura’s feet, where it landed with a splash for him to pick up or kick away

[hereticpop]

asdfghjksdfghj now here's an opinion i was particularly nervous to hear

And the second thing I have to say is GODDAMMIT NAKAI BREAK HIS NOSE ANYWAY although you probably didn't intend for that reaction
as a matter of fact, i did 8DD and it makes me somehow satisfied although at the same time i am feeling guilty for making Kimu be so horrible to Tsu and that they didn't really have any happy time together but-- ah, not this time i guess /needs happy kimutsu therapy as well

pahaha, that pussuma is one of the best things ever 8D

[loveandcoffee]

Hello, we don't know each other but let me just tell you this was brilliant. So much in character, a writing style I enjoyed lots, the way it's structured, I loved it so much.
Thank you for writing this!

[hereticpop]

hello! and sorry for this late reply, work hasn't been leaving much time for me to tell people how grateful and happy i am that they liked my fic. ;p i mean, thank you! unexpected comments are always so lovely. ♥

[lilly0]

OVERLOAD

This was so...everything: awesome, beautiful, sad, crushing, cute, heart-clenching. I loved the boys and at the same time I wanted to slap them all at once (except for Goro maybe :D) OMG, there were so many wrong things going on here... and so many right things *cries* I need to take a break and wait till tomorrow, then I can give a coherent comment. Because until then it's all ASJKLDKJFHHDSJKFDSKJAFHADSKFDSAFGADLGHADSFDSAFJDSAGFADSFJSKADFSDAKFSAKJF

Thanks for writing this!! I've always wished to be able to write you like did here! But I guess I'm simply not good enough ><