First off I give you credit for a new fic *claps happily* and second I already can't wait for the next chapter!
I won't lie it was abit confusing at first cause of the mixed type of writing (sorry no offense) but I had to read it twice for me to understand it better.
Mao is hurting after a breakup with Jun(oh how could you make him into the ex *growls*) haha but still Yamashita is still gorgeous. But I like already how they have met and Mao is acting all flustered and Yamashita is cool as an ox(but really haha). Anyway what and who's more funnier is her friend Becky she's just too funny and I like how she teases Mao especially when telling her ex that she has a new boyfriend.
Oh boy I know long comment again sorry but I've enjoyed this new fic and looking forward to your next chapter^^v.
Thank you I'm glad and relief you like it! I'm sorry if i have confused you, i was trying to experiment. :P
I also enjoyed and found myself looking forward writing Rebecca's lines and scenes. if it wasn't for the love I have for Mao, Becky would me the star of my fic! haha
I didn't know you're back in writing fanfics. I have been AWOL from LJ that's why.But Iam so happy when I checked my friends page.
So Jun is the ex here? Oh well, I guess Tomo is alright too. This reminds me of their ASAHI CM. It's good chapter 2 is already up. That saves me the waiting and anticipating time.
Hope you will also update your other fics. I will reread them again.
To be honest the ASAHI CM is what inspires me to write this fic. Haha I've been so out of the loops so it took me this long to write Fanfics again. Thank you very much for reading. :)
I will try to write some of my old fics but i'm not promising anything. Still looking for the inspiration and energy to write them.
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I won't lie it was abit confusing at first cause of the mixed type of writing (sorry no offense) but I had to read it twice for me to understand it better.
Mao is hurting after a breakup with Jun(oh how could you make him into the ex *growls*) haha but still Yamashita is still gorgeous. But I like already how they have met and Mao is acting all flustered and Yamashita is cool as an ox(but really haha). Anyway what and who's more funnier is her friend Becky she's just too funny and I like how she teases Mao especially when telling her ex that she has a new boyfriend.
Oh boy I know long comment again sorry but I've enjoyed this new fic and looking forward to your next chapter^^v.
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I also enjoyed and found myself looking forward writing Rebecca's lines and scenes. if it wasn't for the love I have for Mao, Becky would me the star of my fic! haha
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So Jun is the ex here? Oh well, I guess Tomo is alright too. This reminds me of their ASAHI CM. It's good chapter 2 is already up. That saves me the waiting and anticipating time.
Hope you will also update your other fics. I will reread them again.
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I've been so out of the loops so it took me this long to write Fanfics again.
Thank you very much for reading. :)
I will try to write some of my old fics but i'm not promising anything. Still looking for the inspiration and energy to write them.
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