Comments | hermione_looney: They all rhyme XD

hermione_looney

They all rhyme XD

Nov 28, 2005 17:11

Sad fact: It's been SO long since I've written a poem that DIDN'T rhyme ( Read more... )

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akutenshi666 November 30 2005, 00:08:01 UTC

Yay! I'm so excited you took my advice. *grins* Personally, I loved it. Especially how it rhymes without sounding cheesy, if you get what I mean, it flows beautifully and for some reason, it sounds like a piece from the 19th century, maybe that's the Poe comment, very romantic yet dealing with the very hot topic of vampirism... that would be considered Gothic, ne?? Excellent example here. *nods* The last stanza I especially loved. Absolutely gorgeous!!
PS. I'm not very used to writing comments, so do forgive my bad..ness..? ^^

hermione_looney November 30 2005, 06:22:54 UTC

Aa, arigatou! Your comment was lovely!