Jack (And Also Jack's Broken Heart)

Sep 21, 2006 12:26

Jack and his broken heart were on the street corner one day.
Jack had 1/2 the needle in him and 1/2 the needle hanging out.
The street corner then called him like a pesky aunt.
The corner where he could say "This truly is home."

And who am I, and who are you
To say that Jack is wrong?

Jack lived in a high rise apartment.
Jack lived alone, sans his demons ( Read more... )

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anonymous September 22 2006, 18:10:51 UTC
interesting, this one is pretty neat, nice concept<2

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heroicdead October 6 2006, 02:10:09 UTC
Wow, I really like this one, I enjoy how there's a character to connect to.
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