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heroineanilem

I belong to you

Feb 11, 2006 14:36

Title: I belong to you

Author: heroineanilem

Disclaimer: They belong to history, this is pure fiction and I don't make money out of it.

Summary: Hephaestion is always there for Alexander, but sometimes he, also, needs reassurance.

Warning:Adult

Feedback:Please

A/N: One of the scenes was inspired by MR's FFH.

I belong to you

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Comments 14

middlemarching February 11 2006, 14:26:08 UTC

That was a thoroughly enjoyable read. :3

I think a lot of time, erotic writing can be over done with attention paid to the wrong details. This is a good example of paying attention to the right ones, and I think you did a great job.

heroineanilem February 11 2006, 17:53:52 UTC

Thank you. This is the first time I wrote a fic with a more graphic content and I hoped it won't sound ridicilous. I agree with you that many times the details are not put in the right place. I'm glad I didn't let you down:)

teamane February 11 2006, 16:04:53 UTC

This is the first fic I read about the Gordian Knot.
And I also loved Hefestion insecurity and the love scene. Very good. ^.^
Wonderful!
:D

heroineanilem February 11 2006, 17:56:32 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Somehow, I like writing about the parts of their lives, which are not often covered in novels.
Thankx.
*hugs*

foxylady187 February 12 2006, 15:45:34 UTC

Thank you for this story. I liked the fact that you wrote about the Gordian Knot, it made fascinating reading.

heroineanilem February 12 2006, 17:55:11 UTC

Thank you for the kind words. The theme sounded inviting, since I think it was there that A. tested his generals' opinions on his aims for the first time. Thanks!

parisad February 12 2006, 16:25:32 UTC

*Once more Alexandros's life was in his hands*
So TRUE. I think his life was truly in Hephaestions's hands, more than he thought. Beautiful fic, with some wonderful poetic line...and graphic is hot and sweet. Well done :)
I like it! And I'm happy to find you again here my dear :)
**hugs**

heroineanilem February 12 2006, 18:01:32 UTC

Thank you, dear. I agree with you: A. must've really understood that once he lost H.;afterall, he's grief showed it, and no matter if he wa poisoned or hearthbroken+ill, he followed him to death. And I'm grateful I didn't overdone graphis scene.
And, you can't imagine how much I'm happy to be here again; exams are over for a while and I've thought they'll never end;)
*hugs and kiss*

parisad February 12 2006, 19:22:04 UTC

Hope your exams were well!! It's so beautiful to write a fic after an exam...;))

heroineanilem February 12 2006, 20:26:25 UTC

They went quite well, thank you, and with doing 2 majors can be tiring, so writing without pressure feels great.

angstman February 13 2006, 08:00:27 UTC

Great story. Love it

heroineanilem February 13 2006, 15:09:35 UTC

I'm happy you like it, since I love your stories:)
*hugs*