"All The Constellations" - Chapter 9: Perception

Jun 12, 2008 13:16

No new characters, but this is my favorite chapter to date.


Location: The Philadelphia Public Library


Jana: Il est allé au supermarché. Pourquoi?
Ruthie: *distracted*
Jana: Pourquoi, Ruth?



Jana: Ruth? Are you even listening?
Ruth: Yeah, whatever.



Jana: Ruth, you need to focus.
Ruth: Don’t call me Ruth. I hate that.
Jana: Then what would you like to be called? Your middle name’s Ann, right? How about Annie?
Ruth: I don’t like that either.



Jana: *exasperated* Then how about Ruthie?
Ruth: Ruthie…I suppose that’s acceptable.



Jana: Shall we continue, then?
Ruthie: No. I don’t like this place.
Jana: Why?



Ruthie: It’s too quiet here.
Jana: *amused* Really?



Jana: I want you to listen.
Ruthie: To what?
Jana: Just listen.



*They listen*



Jana: What did you hear?
Ruthie: ….sounds. Like, iPods being too loud and people laughing. So…not morgue-like.
Jana: Exactly.



Jana: Things aren’t always what they seem, Ruthie. Sometimes you have to really stop and focus to find out the true nature of things. So! Time for some more French.
Ruthie: If you say so…

Location: Josie and Gideon’s Apartment


Delaney: Josie? Are you home? I’m here to pick up that dress-Whoa. You’re not Josie.



Mia: Very good.



Mia: I’m Mia, Josie’s younger sister.
Delaney: Oh right, the stripper.
Mia: I’m glad she speaks so highly of me.
Delaney: Sorry. I’m Delaney. Nice to meet you.



Josie: Midona Sevastra Hawkes, be nice. God, you’re still here? You’re almost as bad as Jana.
Mia: I resent that!
Delaney: *embarassed* Oh Josie….I can come back.



Josie: Ah, no big deal. I have no shame. Mia, out.
Mia: Why?
Josie: How many times have I told you? Pregnant lady always wins.
Delaney: Thanks for getting me the dress, Josie.



Josie: No problem. See you later, Mia.
Mia: See you. Nice to meet you, Delaney.
Delaney: Nice to meet you too.
Josie: Have a seat, Delaney.



Josie: And for the love of God, don’t ask me how I’m doing. I’m pregnant, not terminally ill.
Delaney: *laughs* Okay, I won’t.
Josie: So tell me about this Benjamin guy.



Delaney: Well, I’ve only been on one date with him…
Josie: But it was good enough to merit a nice dress for the second one!



Delaney: Oh, hush, you!
Josie: Do you like him?
Delaney: *smiles* Yeah, I really do.
Josie: Then that’s all that matters.



Delaney: Is that the time? I’ve got to go get ready.
Josie: Well, have a good time, Delaney. Just trust yourself, ‘kay?

Location: The Boardwalk, in historic Philadelphia


Benjamin: Did you have a good time?
Delaney: Yeah, I did.



*They smile as they hold hands*



Benjamin: Can I ask you a question, Delaney?
Delaney: Sure.
Benjamin: What’s the story with the necklace you always wear?



Delaney: My necklace? Well…it’s kind of dumb.
Benjamin: I don’t mind.
Delaney: Here, let’s sit down.



Delaney: This necklace was given to me by my little sister, Bailey. It actually has two pieces, this lock and then a key. She told me that I should give the key to the man I’m going to be with for the rest of my life, because he’ll have the key to my heart.



Delaney: *embarassed* It’s dumb, I know, but it means a lot to me.
Benjamin: I don’t think it’s dumb at all. It’s nice.
*silence*



Benjamin: So…have you ever thought of giving the necklace to anyone yet?
Delaney: No…not really. I need to be absolutely sure before I even consider giving it away.
Benjamin: And what makes you “absolutely sure?”
Delaney: I don’t know. I’ve never been “absolutely sure” before.



Benjamin: *lowering his voice* I want you to be absolutely sure, Delaney.
Delaney: So do I.




To Be Continued...

Best. Chapter. Ever. So far, anyways.

If you look closely in the library pictures, you can see that my copy of Girl With a Pearl Earring is in the background. Jana is named after Jan Vermeer, the painter of Girl With a Pearl Earring. Just a nice little Easter Egg there :D And that conversation Jana has with Ruthie about noise in the library? I've had that conversation many a time when people tell me "It's too quiet in the library!!" If only they knew :D

And the scene between Benjamin and Delaney was my favorite scene to shoot ever. I love the way it turned out, even if the pictures are a touch blurry X/ I have some pictures that I'll post later of how that scene was set up (Polish engineering to the max, I'm telling you).

Other than that, happy Thursday, everyone!!
Previous post Next post
Up