Critique Post/Permission Meme

Oct 06, 2008 11:31

HMD post for Bak Chan. If something seems off about him just make a comment here and I'll do my best to improve on it. This can also be used as a plot post ( Read more... )

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thesoulbound October 6 2008, 21:47:18 UTC
There's not enough of him here in DF. After updating my own knowledge of canon and DGM in general (And also not remembering WHEN you have him from) I think he's a bit dull and lacking in the personality department.

Is it because he's in DF that he's not so flaily? Maybe if we found a Komui to kick him into gear, he'd have more to react to, I don't know.

More Bak, please! There's a Fou to keep in line~

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hersenen October 6 2008, 22:21:25 UTC
KITTIES!!!

*coughs* Anyways I noticed that too. I need to bring flailing Bak out a lot more, and bring him out more in general. I dunno I think I just need to find plots for him. Which reminds me I should put plot post up too~.

So yeah, I'll try to bring out that side of Bak more.

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king_jester October 6 2008, 22:05:36 UTC
I'm not sure you really have a grasp on his character. Bak tends to be pompous and over confident, and most of all he's a leader. I'd like to see him step up and take control of things sometimes.

I've also noticed that you post the bare minimum every month, if that, and rarely if ever finish threads with him. It gives the impression that you don't really want to be playing him at all.

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hersenen October 6 2008, 22:41:46 UTC
Thank you I'll try working on that and bringing his leader side out as much as I can. *salutes*

Haaah y-yeah. I'll admit that a lot of the time I don't really know what to do with him even with the good sized DGM cast, so I kinda wait it hoping something will kick in...which isn't a good idea on my part. XD;

I'll try to work out the kinks and post with him more often. Because I really do like playing him.

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king_jester October 6 2008, 22:48:02 UTC
He has the whole Allen dating Fou thing to contend with! XD I imagine that would make him flail in some fashion. She's kind of like the angry big sister that hits but loves you anyway XD And now she's dating a 16 year old beansprout.

WE NEED TO DO SOMETHING WITH THIS!

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hersenen October 7 2008, 02:07:06 UTC
You are right he really does XD! I don't think he knows yet so that's be perfect for him.

I AGREE 8D!

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