Motivation

[hesselives]

summary: a reason. (sequel to Retribution)

a/n: feel very free to tell me, "you watch too many movies, hesse" or "three drabbles don't make an actual story, hesse. stop spamming everyone."

Comments

[ze_zebra]

✩ it's golden, ok??? Your fic-in-parts is captivating. You made me miss winter. WINTER.

Noir deserves you. It's real good.

[hesselives]

you mean it doesn't sound too much like a bad mafia movie?? (because i'm re-reading it now, and that is pretty much how it comes off, lolol. but whatever gets me typing, i suppose.)

oh god, winter. i came up with that first paragraph after revisiting my unpleasant wintry memories of Michigan. aweijfa;lskdg-- i can't believe i made you miss WINTER. (what sorcery is this? xD)

and you have to know, my heart bursts every time you post or comment, because then i can breathe a sigh of relief and be all, ze hasn't left us! i know you hate PDA, darling, but-- *clings* you're too good to me, bb, always. thank you!!

[ze_zebra]

Pssshhhhh. Are you reading what I'm reading??? CLEARLY NOT. [I could actually list the things that would make me all >.< please, spare me the pain but that would be very gauche, coming from a mere lurker. If it makes you feel better though I will. Maybe.]

NO. It had elements of noir: atmospheric, gritty. (There's something else I wanted to say but I've had wine :) Hesse your writing is SUPER ELEGANT. I wish I had payed more attention to my lit classes so I could give it proper praise (w/ all the important words about structures and whatnot) and idk maybe you'd be able to see this the way I do (and how corny is that?)

(you make me blush)

[hesselives]

it would! and not gauche at all, i promise. :D i'm always, always up for concrit.

oh man, i wish i had some wine right now. ♥ and thank you for saying such nice things, bb! i tend to see the cogs before i see the machine, so each sentence seems like a disconnected cog to me. it doesn't quite link up to the next, so there's a bit of a broken flow as i struggle to see the whole story. (i don't know if that makes any sense, but that's essentially what happens with everything i write. haha.) one crit i got some time ago was that i favor style over substance, which is absolutely true. but it's much harder to deviate from that path than i first thought. my writing tends to lean towards Emotions First, Logic Later. (which is strange, because i am all about Logic First, Emotions Later whenever i make decisions and handle relationships irl.)

(okay, i'm going to stop blathering now! /O\)

[incandescent]

Pfff, Elizabeth. What is this, the awesome crime family. Loving so much.

ANd it's totally legit in parts, it totally, totally is. ♥

[hesselives]

i always thought she was pretty amazing on the show, but during that one episode where she gets set up by Fowler? i was all, OH SHE'S BADASS. (i mean, she runs her own event-planning business and that's pretty much like being a don, right? xD)

ahhh, thank you! *hugs* <333 and LOL, I BELIEVE THAT IS THE OFFICIAL FAMILY NAME.

you do not want to cross Elizabeth Awesome.

oh god, the Awesomes are after us. we are dead men.

[daria234]

YUM. evol Peter and El. yum.

that's the most intelligent comment i can think of :)

love this! interesting direction and very exciting to see!

[hesselives]

thank you so much! <3

i'm just kind of wishing someone would take Peacemaker!Peter and write an entire novella on him. *casts hopeful glance at fandom*

[aisle_one]

Salt grains crunch beneath his feet and plumes of steam hiss from a nearby sewer grate. - This is fantastic.

Also - I LOVE that Elizabeth is the mob boss. Wut?!! Sexy. Speaking of sexy, I can't wait until Peter and Neal have sexy-angry-fast-then-slow-confused-sexy again sex. Because that has to be inevitable since Peter killed Kate. Right?

[hesselives]

thank you! <3 i have pretty strong (negative) feelings about winter, having grown up in MI. haha.

not gonna lie, i just want to see El kick some major ass. literally. xD and YES, THAT IS THE LOGICAL CONCLUSION. (unfortunately, my porn-fu skills are, um, nonexistent rusty. lol.)

[hesselives]

AND, AND: I WATCHED 3x01. 0_____0

MY FEELINGS. THEY ARE SO CONFLICTED.

[aisle_one]

Oh, why come so conflicted? Please do tell.

Also, I'm writing a fic to fix everything. It's like waving a magic wand and *poof* all better.

[lemniciate]

kjhafg PLEASE DON'T STOP SPAMMING EVERYONE. IT'S NOT SPAMMING OKAY. omg elizabeth, so awesome

[hesselives]

awifjsei-- ILU, JENN. <3 (i saw you post recently and i was like YAY, but then i realized i know absolutely nothing about bandom, so then i was like ;____;)

ARE YOU SURE. I LOOKED UP "SPAMMING" IN THE DICTIONARY AND SAW A PICTURE OF MY LJ. xD