Good one ! I really like this story, especially because it is a Shadow-pairing and those are hard to come by in and of themselves, though, of course, Shadow/Celes is even rarer than Shadow/Terra . ( This is the second one I ever found . )
Rather than getting lovey-dovy or otherwise mushy you use a matter-of-fact-tone in your piece which is very fitting for both Celes and Shadow. I can see them acting and talking the way they did in the story .
My favorite part is the ending and the moment when Celes tries to imagine Shadow's face and thinks of Cyan and Sabin . Guess the "lined with worry"-part is just a nicely evocative description when you combine it with Cyan .
Thank you. I was really nervous about fulfilling the prompt but I did my best. I'm glad you liked it, especially since you write such great stuff yourself.
*squeals in glee* Thank you! This was my prompt, and YES. I like how businesslike they both are, and how clearly he sees her, because that's what Shadow does. Yay. YAY!
I'm so glad you liked it. It was a challenge trying to write Shadow, because even with the backstory we get he's so mysterious. I'm happy you found my story IC. Thanks for the prompt!
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Rather than getting lovey-dovy or otherwise mushy you use a matter-of-fact-tone in your piece which is very fitting for both Celes and Shadow. I can see them acting and talking the way they did in the story .
My favorite part is the ending and the moment when Celes tries to imagine Shadow's face and thinks of Cyan and Sabin . Guess the "lined with worry"-part is just a nicely evocative description when you combine it with Cyan .
I'm definitly going to save this .
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This is great. Shadow and Celes work well together.
You wrote a great story.
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