"Burning Phon" (Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Balthier)

[laylah]

Title: Burning Phon

Comments

[lassarina]

*squeals*

*rolls around in cyberpunk sexy*

Eeeeeeeeee. I love the way this fits together, and the slang and the tension in it. Squeal!

[laylah]

^____^ Thank you! Running the sections together was the most fun part, I swear. *dork* ^^;

[laylah]

♥ Thank you!
...This means you can't see quite how blatant a rip-off it is! I find I am okay with this. *cough*

[sister_coyote]

*squeak* *squeak* *squeak* the transitions!

I mean!

and oh god, modded Fran, and Balthier in over his head, and the flight, and and and.

This is a beautiful system, he says. It doesn't give you any problems?

of course not. ♥

[laylah]

^________^

I'm so glad you liked! It was a really cool concept to play with. And doing the transitions was way more fun than it should have been. *cough*

[anonymous]

Hey, This is really cool. Sprawl references noticed and appreciated I like what you've done with these characters in an AU like this. Totally sweet, I poked through some of your other writing and it's really great too *fangirls*.