[Mod!Post] The Moment You've Been Waiting For... The HetaSummer Lightning Challenge!

[shuriken7]

Remember the HetaChristmas Lightning Challenge? Well, now that we are in the midst of the summer we have the HetaSummer Vacation Lightning Challenge!

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Requital [1/2]

[velted]

A/N: Romania's name is Gavril and Norway's name is Lukas."Why are we here

Requital [2/2]

[velted]

At this, there was a shift of something in Lukas's normally emotionless eyes. Whether it was the look on his face, or his words... He didn't know. All that matters was that Lukas stayed, and he could repay a debt he owed since long ago... Even if Lukas didn't remember the favour he had done for him

Re: Requital [2/2]

[kahlanaisling]

Nuuuuuuu nu nu nu nu nu shooooosh /paps/

No this is beautiful you did a wonderful job I love it and it fit the prompt and headcanons this fits mine so well let me just quietly love your work.

The only critique I have to offer is that you should work on your tenses; I couldn't tell if this was written in present or past OTL.

I should better express my gratitude by filling your Magic Trio request XD; I would have it filled sooner but "Groovy" is a ridiculously difficult prompt for me to write.

Thank you!

Re: Requital [2/2]

[velted]

I'm really glad to hear that you've enjoyed it so much x3

And thank you too for the critique!
(Don't worry about offering them, I actually like receiving them since they tell me where I should improve. I'll work on that, and possibly my writing style too. I always have ideas but have problems putting them down into words aldksaodfs /random keyboard smash)

It's no rush at all xD I am struggling with some of my prompts myself.