Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED
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“What do you mean?” he managed to whisper hoarsely.
“I do not recall when it was-when I met the new you for the first time,” she began, her voice almost hypnotizing in tone, “but I remember what happened with aching detail. My brother presented you to me, a gentle, guiding hand pressed at your lower back. ‘Older sister,’ he said pleasantly, ‘You know of Alfred, da? Little one, say hello.’”
Her mind was somewhere far away, trapped in the beginnings of dark, shadowy times; her stare was glassy and unfocused.
“Shyly, ever so shyly, you shifted in front of me, drowning in your too big uniform and hiding behind those golden strands of hair. Trembling, you took my hand, placing a light, chaste brush of a kiss upon it. ‘Miss Yekaterina,’ you said, trying so hard to summon a smile, ‘it is an honor to meet one of Moth-um, Ivan’s family. I hope we will become very ( ... )
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“Acid was poured into his eye, causing permanent, irreversible blindness in the one sight; it was a punishment; a punishment for initially refusing to fight in the planned war,” she said, her voice oddly detached. Snarling, Alfred tightly fingered the tablecloth.
“That-that bastard, Ivan is gonna get-”
“No, America.”
“W-what?”
“It was not my brother,” she said, the smile even more broken than before, “you were the one that did it.”
No.
No-no…
Toris had been the first one to accept him, to take him back after his long, long ordeal, even saying that the American had had the hardest trial of all. He had held him while he cried, comforted him when he had doubted, smiled at him-
The barest brush of lips against his forehead.
‘I believe in you.’
Inhale. Exhale. Inhaleexhale. Inhaleexhaleinhaleexhale-
“Mr. America?”
Oh god; oh, god- what had he done?
“Mr. America!”
Hatred; he deserved hatred instead of love-
“America!”
Click.He felt it slipping away, something cold and vile taking over ( ... )
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So we finally learned the mystery of Lithuania's eye. And America...I can't believe Liet and Ukraine have both forgiven him.
I love that you have Alfred snap...it was a much needed reminder that, well, he's been changed by the past 30 years.
I'm glad we learned a bit more about what's going on in the world but that pesky knock at the door...is it friend or foe? I'm personally leaning towards foe. It's been too calm XD
I look forward to next time <3
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Ukraine sure is getting alot of visitors. I'm glad we finally know what happen to Toris' eye. All I can say is OUCH. This probably isn't Alfred's only time he hurted another nation. I'M DYING TO FIND OUT MORE!!!
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Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=7162839#t7162839
Red fall: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12146698#t12146698
Red Ascent parts 1-25: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12928778#t12928778
My reply on the fill itself:
What a cliffhanger. Ahhhhhhhhh I can't wait for the next part again! My thoughts are exactly what info!anon said. Also, I love how you write Ukraine!
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Toris met the azure gaze of the bartender, a small smile manifesting across his lips. The man was tall and muscular, stern sapphire eyes missing no detail. Blonde locks fell straight across his forehead, softening his sharp features and demeanor; polishing a glass with a tattered rag, he leaned back against the wood and set the cup before Toris, tossing the cloth over his shoulder.
“They were here again; looking for you,” he said, pouring clear liquid into the container before the Lithuanian, “I told them that you weren’t here; and, technically, you weren’t. After all, you just got back.” The brunette couldn’t stop a grin from rapidly spreading across his face and laughed as he sipped his drink.
“Never one to lie, are you, Ludwig?” he chuckled, “But thank you; I’m sorry you have to keep doing this just for me.” The German paused as he was returning the liquor bottle the cabinet, sparing the elder a look.
“Toris, I would never reveal your presence here,” Ludwig said, his gaze crinkling at the thought, “Those ( ... )
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A-Anon ;_; You left us with a cliffhanger...then changed scenes! Oh how cruel. It really helped build the tension, and I loved being able to see the Resistance and how divided it was and what happened to Ludwig and a hint as to Feliciano... T_T
You never fail to cause me to cry, A-Anon. I'm still really hoping for a happy ending, but each update just seems to push that hope further and further away.
A-anon, you are an amazing writer, did you know that? Truly spectacular.
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I. Love. Him.
...but I can't be the only one who read that "believe in him" part and immediately thought "believe in the me who believes in you!" and started laughing...
But uh. That's just my anime geekiness showing.
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You meanie, leaving the cliff-hanger... hanging. And I hope that the Resistance becomes more united in time. United we stand, divided we fall. The tension is really mounting~
I don't like the sound of these hints about Feliciano ;_;
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And my comments will be really late~
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I love that you've written more of Toris' POV and totally answering alot of my questions. Ack, a divided Resistance .... at least they have the same goal, right?
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