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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

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Afternoon Headlines 8/? anonymous July 24 2009, 19:21:30 UTC

Parts 1-7: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=13419786
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12808202#t12808202

“As public debates continue in Italy and Scandinavians discuss their Nations, citizens from countries around the world ask themselves-“Is my Nation next?” While some remain indifferent to the accidental outing, others are reacting with blatant concern. Many parents we have spoken to question if this is promoting homosexuality to their children, which many religious families strongly believe will leave an impression on their young generation ( ... )

Afternoon Headlines 9a/? anonymous July 24 2009, 19:22:28 UTC

Bright morning light filtered through translucent curtains as Arthur Kirkland stirred on the second morning of the annual world meeting. As he roused himself into the world of the waking, he realized there was someone else in the bed with him. Before he even opened his eyes Arthur knew it was Alfred by the warm, muscular body he was nuzzled up against. Alfred was still asleep, it seemed, judging by his soft snoring. England sat up and stretched, shaking the sluggishness from his mind, and leaned over America ( ... )

Re: Afternoon Headlines 9b/? anonymous July 24 2009, 19:23:07 UTC

“Oh…” was all Arthur said in response, taking another sip of tea. He still had the same dazed look on his face before his features changed abruptly to realization. Without saying a word, Arthur placed the teacup and plate down on the coffee table and lunged across Alfred to the other side of the couch where the TV remote lay on the armrest. Mashing the ‘power’ button, the TV blinked to life as the morning news began playing across the screen.

“-unconfirmed reports of some kind of blast in the London underground. Hundreds of commuters are now pouring out of King’s Cross, Liverpool, and Edgware tube stations. None of these citizens seem to be injured …let me see if I can talk to some of them…Sir! Sir, can you tell us what you saw ( ... )

Afternoon Headlines 9c/? anonymous July 24 2009, 19:24:05 UTC

Alfred and Arthur watched the live report for a few more minutes before England noticed they should get ready if they wanted to arrive on time to the meeting. It would be no use sitting and doing nothing anyway, the morning’s developments would no doubt be discussed with the rest of the G8 ( ... )

Re: Afternoon Headlines 9c/? anonymous July 25 2009, 01:34:06 UTC

i've liked every single one of these segments, and this one was just as amazing. i love how you write us/uk. it's just lovely--and sad.

can't wait for more.

Re: Afternoon Headlines 9c/? anonymous July 26 2009, 18:36:56 UTC

England :( It's so easy to forget real life events in all the crack that abounds in Hetalia. Kudos to you for bringing in recent (er, relatively recent) news stories as part of your fill.

Re: Afternoon Headlines 9c/? anonymous July 27 2009, 00:41:07 UTC

Thank you! I really hadn't intended to include it in the first place, but then I realized it was such perfect timing and had to put it in the story.

Re: Afternoon Headlines 9c/? anonymous July 26 2009, 23:57:45 UTC

Oh, I've liked every one of these parts so far, and you're doing an absolutely fantastic job with making this funny and serious at the same time. I can't wait for more, anon! <3

Afternoon Headlines 10a/? anonymous July 27 2009, 03:34:19 UTC

Here’s another few parts! I almost didn’t continue this, but I got 2 lovely reviews within a few hours today and was like “I actually have readers! *_*” And I can’t let anyone down. Thank you for all the lovely reviews!

~*~The rest of the day, Alfred decided, went by in an incomprehensible blur of colors, sounds, and cameras as he followed Arthur along to where ever the injured Nation needed to go. When the two arrived at the allotted hotel, the first thing they encountered in the lobby was their fellow Nations firing questions at them, mainly in regards to Arthur ( ... )

Afternoon Headlines 10b/? anonymous July 27 2009, 03:35:28 UTC

In all the chaos and panic England was only sure of one thing. He had to get out there. He had to see his people. The feeling was not even a want- it was a need.

Following the short press conference, in which Arthur and Alfred stood behind the English leader, the men were led out to a black limo, no doubt one of their most secure vehicles for this time of disaster. Arthur questioned his boss on their destination.

“We’re going to Tavistock Square; a packed double decker bus was blown up there. It’s not confirmed, but some believe the culprit to be a suicide bomber.”

Time stopped for England when he heard those words. An icy feeling wormed it’s way throughout his whole body and he couldn’t even bring himself to blink. Suicide bombers… that meant…he had been right. This had not been a mistake- it had been a deliberate attack on Britain. His stomach started doing flips at the shock so he gripped his middle and leant over his knees. It was almost too horrible of a thought to bear. ‘Who would do this? Who would-’ But England was cut ( ... )

Afternoon Headlines 10c/? anonymous July 27 2009, 03:36:39 UTC

Arthur’s body and mind went numb after that. It was really all real after that moment. This was not some story he heard on the evening news that happened in a country across the world. It was right here, in his capital, happening now right before his eyes. England didn’t even feel the sting as he knees gave out and collided with the ground, probably getting scraped and cut on broken glass and splintered metal. When the tears began to slip down his face he did not perceive their presence. The press photographers began to turn their cameras and flashes towards him ( ... )

Afternoon Headlines 10c(Notes)/? anonymous July 27 2009, 03:37:39 UTC

The beginning of this was really difficult to write for some reason. But then when I got to the limo scene, it got ten time easier to write.why am I so comfortable writing sad scenes? ;_; I used a reference pic for the blown up bus, found here-http://tinyurl.com/mdkegg

Anyway, the updates are going to start coming a lot more infrequently now. I have band things for the next three days, a few days off, and then 2 weeks of band camp. But none of the events are all day, so I’ll have time to write, just a little less than I normally do. :)

So…What do you guys think of France proposing to Canada? Hopefully I have more than three readers, so please take your time to just write a little message because I really want to know everyone’s opinion on this. I’m not sure if I want to include it in the plot…

Re: Afternoon Headlines 10c(Notes)/? anonymous July 27 2009, 03:59:56 UTC

Anon who told you about when Canada legalized same sex marriage here!

I'm not exactly fond of US/UK, but gahhh! T__T

As for France proposing to Canada...that would be interesting, given their history in the last few decades and the fact that in France, same-sex marriage is still illegal. If you go with France proposing, you might want to address this. ^^;

Re: Afternoon Headlines 10c(Notes)/? anonymous July 27 2009, 04:28:14 UTC

oh this was a wondefully sad instalment! I loved every minute of it! >w< (and alfred even being so sweet snd careing at the end, ahh I love the fluff between them.)

ohh, france and canada next! I hope its just as delicious! have fun at camp ad band!^^

(and fyi, I'm also a reader of this, and I'll be commenting alot from now on jsut to get more story.^^)

Re: Afternoon Headlines 10c(Notes)/? anonymous July 27 2009, 04:55:10 UTC

...I'm glad I reviewed earlier. I really am a lurker but my unlurking helped to motivate you to continue this? orz I really need to be more outgoing.

Once again, I love that you work in relatively current events into your fill and seamlessly fit the Nations in. This part was just so sad, but I did have to roll my eyes...you wrote the media well. In the midst of disaster, they still look for "scandals." The media...so insensitive *sigh*

I would love to see France proposing to Canada, but if you don't think it'll fit in with the plot, don't include it :)

Authornon anonymous July 27 2009, 11:59:26 UTC

Thank you for reviewing earlier! Yes, it was rough writing the media like that, but it's also kinda true.

To all me readers-
Thank you for all the quick reviews! I didn't expect that many so fast ._.;; Also I hope I didn't sound needy, I almost didn't want to ask for reviews but I needed the opinions. Thank you everyone again! i'll take your opinions into consideration.

And don't feel bad about lurking...I do it all the time to, haha.*needs to delurk more often*

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