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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

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Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [1a/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 15:47:13 UTC

Request here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=13765130

Summary of request: Human AU. Toris and Feliks were best friends as little kids, but Toris never figured out that Feliks was a girl. Feliks had to move away, but now they're teenagers and "she's" moving back; Toris, subsequently, has some "Wait, what? B-But I'm not gay! I'm not!", which she helps him get over.

Putting up Part 1 now, the rest to come pretty soonish!

Been lovin' you since you was a child, girl,
'Cause you and me is two of a kind
-Aerosmith, "Deuces are Wild"She was beautiful, he remembered often, with soft, pale-blonde hair, green eyes, and a smile that set his heart to dancing ( ... )

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [1b/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 15:47:53 UTC

She didn’t seem to fare much better when they went to the cafeteria for their lunch break. When Toris found her, she’d taken up a seat at the end of one of the long benches, with a white and pink pony doll on the table in front of her, and was picking disgustedly at a tray of mystery meat, gravy, and fruit salad. Her nose wrinkled up a little when she made that sickened face. Toris’ stomach tied itself into nervous little knots.

“H…Hi!” he had managed, his face beet-red. “Are you… Uh. Is anyone sitting here?”

Lexi turned her pouting face towards him. “Besides, like, Sundance here? Umm, does it look like they are ( ... )

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [2a/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 17:08:28 UTC

She was like a princess, he thought-as stubborn and pushy as she was pretty and imaginative, constantly telling him what their next game would be, dragging him across the playground or through the woods with a small hand clamped firmly around his, or getting him into trouble one way or another ( ... )

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [2b/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 17:09:15 UTC

They did as he’d suggested, barely leaving each other’s sight in the last month. They went to the water park, swam in the river, organized big games of Capture the Flag and Cops and Robbers with everyone else in the neighborhood, watched movies, made up stories ( ... )

Re: Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [2b/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 19:06:30 UTC

The poor thins D: It's such a nice read, and I sincerely hope you'll continue soon, because I can hardly wait for the next parts<3

Author!Anon anonymous August 8 2009, 19:13:58 UTC

This one is actually sort of writing itself, so it shouldn't be long at all!

Re: Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [2b/?] anonymous August 9 2009, 03:38:05 UTC

ohgodilovethis

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [3a/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 19:23:58 UTC

I feel obligated to warn for Gilbert's mouth, teenage boys being teenage boys, and Feliks's chatspeak. DAMMIT, POLAND. WHY CAN'T YOU TYPE?!She made good on her promise to call, and every night for the next few months, they would run up their parents’ phone bills talking to each other. Then, it was every other night; then, once a week or so; then monthly, and after a while, months would go by in between calls ( ... )

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [3b/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 19:25:51 UTC

It happened one late summer afternoon, as he sat in Al’s basement with a few of their other friends and waited for Al and Matt’s mom to bring a tray of her famous iced tea down. Elisaveta was trying to convince Roderich to play her something on the little electronic keyboard over behind the stairs; Roderich, though he’d made clear his revulsion at the thought of using such an inferior instrument, was close to caving ( ... )

Re: Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [3b/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 19:39:21 UTC

Oh, this is completely fantastic!~ I absolutely love it X3 You have the characters down so well, and Feliks and Toris were so adorable as kids and, gah, it's just too great for me to express in words!~

I really enjoy your style of writing, and the way you control time so well, having skips, but with just the right amount of summary <3 And the character interactions in the last section, and Toris's obliviousness to certain pronouns XD

Amazing job~ I'm more than willing to offer you my first born, if you want it <3

OP~

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [4a/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 22:16:47 UTC

By the time Lexi’s move-in date arrived, Toris had worked himself into a worried frenzy. He’d brushed his hair five times that morning, spent the day before at the gym in a frantic attempt to feel less scrawny and unattractive, and, because he hadn’t been able to stay asleep anyway, woken up early and baked her favorite cookies. She’d been his best friend, after all, and he wanted to make sure she felt welcome again ( ... )

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [4b/?] anonymous August 8 2009, 22:18:29 UTC

When all the boxes had gone where they were going, Lexi dragged him up the stairs and to the room she’d claimed as hers ( ... )

Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [5/?] anonymous August 9 2009, 00:57:56 UTC

Saturday couldn’t go by fast enough, as Feliks waited for the evening to come. With Liet coming over to help, they’d gotten unpacked much quicker than he and his mom had expected. The downside of that, though, was that if left him a day with nothing to do but worry, and worrying? So not cool. It like, gave you wrinkles and shit.

He couldn’t believe himself. What, ten seconds around his childhood crush, and that was all it took to get him head-over-heels for the guy again?

He didn’t want to expect too much. Liet hadn’t seen him in seven years, after all, and they’d just been friends even then-Hell, the guy could have a girlfriend, for all he knew!

If he did, he caught himself thinking, she’d better be amazing. Hypothetical Girlfriend had better not ever take what she had for granted, because God...

It had surprised him, how much taller Liet had grown, so tall that he didn’t have to lean down anymore to rest his head in the crook of his neck. The long hair, that had surprised him, too, but God, it totally suited him. Somehow, ( ... )

Re: Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [5/?] anonymous August 9 2009, 18:22:41 UTC

OH MY GOD ANON. THIS. YES.

<3

I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I AM SO EXCITED FOR MORE OF THIS.

Re: Deuces are Wild [LietPol] [5/?] anonymous August 10 2009, 00:55:02 UTC

MOAR.
BECAUSE MOAR.

...seriously, I'm dying here to know what'll happen next *3*

OP~ anonymous August 10 2009, 02:49:25 UTC

YOU WILL MARRY ME, YES? CUZ OMG I LOVE YOU. YES. JUST...YES.

;A; This is just so good!~ I really wanna know what happens next! Your characterization continues to be great, and you handle the situation so well X3

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