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Twisted England, AU mpreg(America) anonymous September 11 2009, 20:07:06 UTC

Original Prompt: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=17131554#t17131554

Another mpregAmerica request, but this time with a (very) dark twist ( ... )

The Dark I Know Well [9a] anonymous September 11 2009, 20:15:01 UTC

America hated to admit it to himself, but he couldn’t deny the fact that all of the children were absolutely beautiful, even when sporting their father’s features. Rhode Island looked practically just the same as England, minus only the eyebrows. Connecticut got those, but that was all he received from England’s gene pool. And the Carolinas had a trace of them as well, although not nearly as thick or unmanageable as his but they did not seem to compliment their baby blue eyes well ( ... )

The Dark I Know Well [9b] anonymous September 11 2009, 21:46:28 UTC

“E-England, w-why can’t I ever l-leave? W-why d-do you do this? W-what happened t-to the man w-who raised m-me ( ... )

The Dark I Know Well [9c] anonymous September 11 2009, 21:49:00 UTC

“Shush you two! Remember that story! Tell it to your siblings when they get older! But NEVER tell it to Pop. He doesn’t like it, and if you tell him, he’ll never let me tell you guys stories again ( ... )

Re: The Dark I Know Well [9c] anonymous September 11 2009, 23:19:27 UTC

http://i29.tinypic.com/wc1oxi.jpg This is all America wants to say about this.

Re: The Dark I Know Well [9c] anonymous September 12 2009, 00:25:44 UTC

OmG, that was epic...
It's heartbreaking to see America give, but I don't blame him.
Under those circumstance, it seems impossible.

Re: The Dark I Know Well [9c] anonymous September 12 2009, 03:49:43 UTC

...Can I just say I really really love to hate your England ( ... )

Re: The Dark I Know Well [9c] anonymous September 12 2009, 04:43:23 UTC

Glad we can hate 'em. Because Iggy is normally my favorite character and it's like '...Why am I making myself so depressed with him?' but it's gotta be done I suppose ( ... )

Not OP anonymous September 13 2009, 00:05:14 UTC

First of all, I'd like to thank you for continuing this piece. I was beginning to lose hope that it was not going to continue so I'm very grateful that you're back.

Now on to the story...Virginia seems so attached to her Pop and it saddens me to see her Dama's reaction. Poor little, Virginia. She doesn't know the whole truth. I wonder, what if she accidentally saw Pop's "punishments" on her Dama, would she be the same? Would she convince her sibling to go against their Pop? Oh the possibility!! Not trying to sway you, I SWEAR!!

And a question for you! How long do the pregnancy lasts? In earlier chapters you state that it was nine months but later on shorten the duration (because nation-tans are M~A~G~I~C~A~L~~!!), so what is the exact length? If it was nine months, then the twins were prisoners for at least 6 years. Forgive my curiosity but I JUST HAVE TO KNOW!!! Not crazy.And woah! Did Canada just summoned a bird with his mapleness?! THAT'S EFFIN' AWESOME!!! The realist in me wonders why he didn't use the soot from the fireplace ( ... )

~WriterAnon~ anonymous September 13 2009, 00:21:31 UTC

Yeah, got so distracted. Oy. Sorry!

Virginia is actually going to be the one who in the Epilogue is going to bring England back to the family for a few days. Weston quite possibly might take that place of the one who sees England for what he is. I'll have to see since there's only maybe 2-4 chapters left.

I'm going with 9 for each, despite how unclear that is. Rhode Island is the only one that wasn't. I don't describe all the pregnancies cause that's just going to get far too repetitive. But the states don't grow that fast. Like, they fly through their toddler years but stay in their child years for awhile. So they are about 6... I think. *didn't even keep track. Fail writer OTL*

And he was just in a hurry to get the letter out. And thinking of it, I don't think they had one. England is leaving them with bare necessities [Like the windows will not open more than a third so they can't escape and stuff].

Not OP anonymous September 13 2009, 02:43:13 UTC

It's quite alright. Life is full of [delicious] distraction, no?

A part of me had hope that you would make Virginia go against England more because of America's attachment to her, being his first child and all. In my head canon, the states-tan would do anything for their mother country (e.g. During the Civil War the southern states seceded all for the better "vision" of America)

But I suppose you're right in a sense that Virginia is way too sweet to cause anyone harm let alone her parents (even tho one of her parents deserves ULTIMATE PUNISHMENT).

Oh okay, the repetitive thing makes sense. It's just my state-tan kinda "popped" out of no where in this chapter and it struck me as odd. Apologizes for the nit-picking!

Canadian rushing is so epic then. Heehee. How do they keep warm? Fireplaces are not necessities? Also, it just hit me that it took Canada 6 years to send a message like that...YES, I'M VERY SLOW England must have loosen his security over the place?

reCAPTCHA: earshot 46;545 (Is this England's punishment, reCAPTCHA?)

Re: The Dark I Know Well [9c] anonymous November 5 2009, 10:57:53 UTC

I think crazydark! England is good once in a while. Will you be continuing this anon?!

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